自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is short, ungrammatical and unclear. To improve: start with a clear topic sentence using the past tense, add one or two supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with or a memory), and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Pay attention to past tense verbs, articles, and word order.

示例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends every afternoon, which helped me feel independent. Because the streets were quiet, I learned to balance and enjoy cycling safely.

建议: Your answer gives a short opinion but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Improve by giving a clear opinion sentence, then add a specific supporting detail or statistic and a reason using linking words (e.g., because, since, therefore). Use complete sentences and natural phrasing.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country. For example, a recent survey showed that about 13% of people use bikes regularly, probably because cycling is cheap and convenient for short trips. Therefore, you can see many people cycling to work or school in urban areas.

× I have bike when I child and I'm. Neighbor around.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and my neighbor did too.

Errors: missing article before 'bike' (use 'a bike'), wrong tense and missing auxiliary ('I had' not 'I have' for past), missing 'was' for 'I was a child', and sentence fragments ('and I'm. Neighbor around.' is ungrammatical). This fits Article errors (22), Past tense issue (5), and Sentence structure errors (26). Suggestion: Use the past tense consistently for childhood (had, was), include the article 'a' before singular countable nouns, and combine related ideas into one complete sentence (e.g., 'and my neighbor did too').

× Yes, because. 13 percent is in my country my use the bike.

✓ Yes, because about 13 percent of people in my country use bikes.

Errors: fragmented sentence and incorrect word order. '13 percent is in my country my use the bike' is ungrammatical; needs quantifier phrase 'about 13 percent of people', correct preposition 'in my country', correct verb form 'use' for plural, and plural noun 'bikes' or 'use bikes'. This corresponds to Quantifier errors (14), Sentence structure errors (26), and Incorrect order of adjectives/words (18). Suggestion: Reorder the sentence into a standard subject-verb-object structure: 'about 13 percent of people in my country use bikes.' Keep consistent plural forms and include 'about' for approximate statistics.