自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban tidak memenuhi kriteria: tidak dalam bahasa Inggris, tidak langsung menjawab, sangat singkat dan tidak relevan. Perlu menjawab langsung dengan satu kalimat topik lalu menambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung menggunakan kata penghubung dan detail spesifik (mis. jenis sepeda, kapan atau siapa meminjamkan). Berikan maksimal 3–4 kalimat total.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to balance gradually and felt very proud when I could ride without them.

建议: Jawaban tidak relevan dan tidak langsung menjawab pertanyaan. Perlu menyatakan opini di kalimat topik lalu mendukung dengan alasan dan contoh spesifik, menggunakan kata penghubung untuk koherensi. Batasi jawaban hingga 3–4 kalimat dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai (mis. commuting, environment, affordable).

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use bikes for short commutes because they are affordable and good for the environment, and some cities have dedicated bike lanes which encourages more cycling.

× Aku punya saswatu.

✓ I had something.

The student mixed Indonesian with English and used present tense 'punya' while the question asked about the past ('Did you have...when you were a child?'). Also 'saswatu' is Indonesian; use English 'something'. Change to past 'had' to match the question's tense. Suggestion: use past simple for possessions in past (I had a bike).

× I have something special for you.

✓ I have something special for you.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and fits a general present statement. No correction needed. However, in the context of the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' this reply is off-topic. Suggestion: answer the question directly, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'