梦想— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; trả lời trực tiếp, cô đọng và tự nhiên hơn; dùng câu chủ đề rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể; tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi thì. Ví dụ: dùng thì hiện tại đơn để nói thói quen, dùng cấu trúc "I often dream that..." và tránh mượn từ không phù hợp (ví dụ "memorize" không đúng ngữ cảnh).

示例: Yes, I can often remember my dreams, especially when I wake up right after them. I frequently dream that I am a princess living in a beautiful castle, which feels very vivid and stays with me for a long time.

建议: Cải thiện độ rõ ràng và logic: trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi (có/không và vì sao), dùng liên từ để nối ý, sửa lỗi động từ và đại từ; cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn để làm rõ. Tránh dùng cấu trúc mơ hồ như "chase my dreams" nếu ý là "talk about dreams" hoặc "share dreams".

示例: Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with my friends because we often talk about our daily lives. For example, after studying I tell them about a funny dream and we laugh, which helps me relax.

建议: Cải thiện biểu đạt ý chính rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời "Yes" hoặc "No" và giải thích cụ thể lý do; sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ "dreams can have special meanings"; dùng ví dụ cụ thể như giấc mơ báo trước hoặc nhắc nhở). Tránh câu bị bỏ dở và từ sai (ví dụ "son's dream" không rõ nghĩa).

示例: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they sometimes remind me to prepare for something. For example, dreaming about an exam might make me realise I need to study more.

建议: Rõ ràng về mục tiêu thực tế và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp; nếu nói về ước mơ (ambition) nên dùng từ phù hợp và giải thích cụ thể các bước hoặc cảm xúc; tránh lặp và ngập ngừng. Nên nói một câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết ngắn (kế hoạch, lí do, cảm xúc).

示例: Yes, I would like to make my dreams come true. Although I often imagine being a princess, in real life I want to achieve my goals by studying hard and spending time with friends who support me.

× Yes, sometimes I'm remembering my dreams, especially if I'm wake up shortly after dream.

✓ Yes, sometimes I remember my dreams, especially if I wake up shortly after dreaming.

Use simple present 'remember' for habitual actions instead of 'am remembering' (present continuous). Use 'wake' not 'I'm wake' and 'after dreaming' (gerund) to refer to the action of dreaming. Suggested improvement: use simple present for habits and use gerund forms after prepositions.

× I often dream about I am Princess and live in the beautiful castle.

✓ I often dream that I am a princess and live in a beautiful castle.

After 'dream about' or 'dream that', use a clause with 'that' or use gerund; include the article 'a' before 'princess' and 'a' before 'beautiful castle'. Use lowercase 'princess'. Suggested improvement: use 'dream that' + clause and include necessary articles.

× And this dream make me very memorize.

✓ And this dream makes me remember things very vividly.

Use correct verb form 'makes' (subject-verb agreement) and use appropriate verb 'remember' rather than 'memorize' in this context; 'memorize' is action to learn, while 'remember' is to recall. 'Vividly' is an adverb modifying 'remember'. Suggested improvement: choose correct verb and adverb for clarity.

× Yes, sometimes I'm also chase my dreams with my friends because I often talking with my daily life with my friends and they often joking me.

✓ Yes, sometimes I also talk about my dreams with my friends because I often talk about my daily life with them and they often joke with me.

Use simple present 'talk' for habitual actions instead of 'I'm chase' or 'talking'. 'Chase my dreams' has a different meaning; likely means 'talk about my dreams'. Use 'joke with me' rather than 'joking me'. Suggested improvement: use simple present for routines and correct verb patterns ('talk about', 'joke with').

× This have me relax and comfortable after studying time.

✓ This makes me relaxed and comfortable after study time.

Use 'makes' for subject-verb agreement. Use adjective 'relaxed' (not 'relax') to describe the person and 'comfortable' is correct. 'After studying time' is unnatural; 'after study time' or 'after studying' works. Suggested improvement: ensure correct verb form and adjective choice, and use natural time expressions.

× Yes, son's dream is surprise in this like a brings special meanings for me in the life, like a remind me a need to prepare or.

✓ Yes, sometimes a dream surprises me and seems to bring special meaning to my life, like reminding me that I need to prepare.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'sometimes a dream surprises me' and 'bring special meaning to my life'. Use 'reminding me that I need to prepare' for the intended idea. Suggested improvement: break into clear clauses and use correct verb forms and connectors.

× Yes, I'm really into that.

✓ Yes, I'm really into that and I want to make it come true.

Sentence is short but acceptable; added continuation to answer the question about making dreams come true. Use 'want to make it come true' to express future intent. Suggested improvement: explicitly state intention to fulfill the dream.

× I'm often dream and become a beautiful Princess and live in the castle.

✓ I often dream of becoming a beautiful princess and living in a castle.

Use 'dream of doing' + gerund for imagined experiences. Use articles 'a' before 'beautiful princess' and 'a' before 'castle'. Use lowercase 'princess'. Suggested improvement: use 'dream of' + gerund and include articles.

× So I want the dream is uh, come to.

✓ So I want the dream to come true.

Use the infinitive 'to come true' after 'want' rather than 'the dream is come to'. Suggested improvement: use 'want' + object + infinitive ('want the dream to come true').

× I will, uh, Princess with my friends in.

✓ I will, uh, be a princess with my friends in the dream.

Missing verb 'be' and unclear prepositional phrase. Use 'be a princess' and complete with 'in the dream' to show context. Suggested improvement: include the correct verb and complete the prepositional phrase for clarity.