记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Mejora la naturalidad y corrige errores leves. Mantén la respuesta más directa y evita repeticiones. Incluye un solo motivo claro y una breve explicación específica sobre cómo memorizas en tu trabajo. También corrige pequeños errores gramaticales como “specially” → “especially” y “show” si quisiste decir “job” o “field”.

範例: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising things, especially technical details related to my job. As a fire protection engineer, I often memorise calculations and standards, so I practise them regularly which helps me retain them.

建議: Da más contexto y muestra sentimientos de forma natural en pocas frases. Añade una breve explicación de por qué ocurrió y qué aprendiste, usando conectores simples como “because” o “so”.

範例: Yes, a few years ago I forgot my father’s 60th birthday because I was overwhelmed with work. It upset both of us, so now I set reminders well in advance to avoid that happening again.

建議: Sé más preciso y conciso. Evita frases redundantes como “the time that I go walking”; en su lugar di “when I go for a walk”. Añade una razón breve para dar más contenido (por ejemplo, por salud o rutina).

範例: I need to remember several daily tasks, but most importantly I remember when I go for a walk with my girlfriend at about 6:00 every evening because it’s our time to relax and exercise.

建議: Organiza la respuesta con una oración temática y 1–2 detalles. Corrige errores como doble artículo “a a” y uso de plural “a birthdays”. Usa vocabulario específico sobre métodos (phone reminders, calendar apps, to-do lists) para mostrar variedad léxica.

範例: I usually use a combination of sticky notes on my desk and a small notebook to record birthdays and important dates. I also set phone reminders for critical events so I don’t forget them.

× Yes, I think so. I am good at memorizing things, specially topics related to my show. I work as a Fire Protection engineer and I always work with numbers.

✓ Yes, I think so. I am good at memorizing things, especially topics related to my job. I work as a fire protection engineer, and I always work with numbers.

The word 'specially' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'especially' (adverb of degree). 'Show' seems to be a wrong word choice given the context; 'job' is more appropriate. 'Fire Protection engineer' should be in lowercase for the profession and a comma is needed before 'and' to join independent clauses. Suggestions: use 'especially' for emphasis, choose vocabulary that matches context ('job' instead of 'show'), and punctuate compound sentences with a comma before 'and'.

× Yes, some years ago I forgot the birthday of my father. It was a pity because he was 60 years old at that moment.

✓ Yes, some years ago I forgot my father's birthday. It was a pity because he was 60 at the time.

Use the possessive form 'my father's birthday' instead of 'the birthday of my father' for natural English. 'At that moment' is grammatically correct but 'at the time' is more idiomatic in this context. Also, '60 years old' can be shortened to '60' after 'was'. Suggestions: use natural possessive forms and idiomatic time expressions ('at the time').

× In my daily life, I need to remember several things, but the most important one is the time that I go walking with my girlfriend, which is around 6:00 every day.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember several things, but the most important is the time I go for a walk with my girlfriend, which is around 6:00 every day.

'The most important one' is wordy; 'the most important' is sufficient. 'Go walking' is awkward; common expressions are 'go for a walk' or 'go walking' without 'the time that'. Remove 'that' and use 'the time I go for a walk'. Also omit the unnecessary article 'a' before 'walk' when using 'go for a walk' structure. Suggestions: use idiomatic verb phrases ('go for a walk') and simplify noun phrases ('the most important').

× Well usually I try to stick notes near my desk or maybe using a a book where I can write some important things like a birthdays or important dates.

✓ Well, usually I try to stick notes near my desk or maybe use a book where I can write important things like birthdays or important dates.

Comma needed after 'Well' for introductory element. 'Using a a book' has a duplicated 'a' and the gerund 'using' is awkward after 'or maybe'; use base verb 'use'. 'Some important things like a birthdays' has incorrect article 'a' before plural 'birthdays'—remove 'a'. Suggestions: include commas after introductory words, avoid duplicated articles, match verb forms after coordinating conjunctions ('or maybe use'), and ensure articles agree with singular/plural nouns.