列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid filler words (e.g., "umm"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Reduce repetition (you mention forgetting twice). Aim for varied vocabulary (e.g., "essential" or "useful").

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember items and stick to my budget. For example, last week I saved money by only buying the items on my list, which prevented impulse purchases.

建議: Avoid hesitation markers and conditional confusion. Give a clear statement about what types of lists you make and one brief reason or example showing effectiveness. Use precise phrasing instead of repeating "umm" and "if it was".

範例: Yes, I regularly make lists for tasks like housework and studying because they keep me organized. For instance, by following my study checklist I complete all assignments on time almost always.

建議: Good clear opinion and supporting reasons; improve formality (avoid "wanna") and tighten sentences. Use linking words (e.g., "firstly", "also") and give a brief example or result to make it more specific.

範例: Some people dislike lists because they prefer to act spontaneously. Firstly, they enjoy flexibility; secondly, they may feel lists are pointless if they rarely follow them, so they see list-making as a waste of time.

建議: Answer is clear and relevant but contains informal contractions ("gonna") and repetition. Begin with a direct preference statement, then give concise reasons using linking words. Replace casual language with neutral vocabulary.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it, so it's convenient and easy to update. However, I sometimes use paper for longer plans because I find writing by hand helps me remember tasks better.

× I think it's vital for a person to make a list before they go shopping.

✓ I think it's vital for a person to make a list before he or she goes shopping.

The original mixes singular 'a person' with plural pronoun 'they' and uses verb form 'go' that should agree with singular. This is a singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issue; use 'he or she' (or rephrase to plural such as 'people' and 'they go') so pronoun number matches and verb agrees. Suggestion: use 'he or she' or change 'a person' to 'people' and keep 'they go'.

× Umm, in case I forgot something or I remember that there's something missing that I didn't actually write down on my list.

✓ Umm, in case I forget something or I remember that there is something missing that I didn't actually write down on my list.

The clause 'in case' refers to a possible future or habitual situation and should use present tense 'forget' not past 'forgot'. Also 'there's' is informal but acceptable; keep full 'there is' for clarity. Suggestion: use present tense after 'in case' for hypothetical or habitual events.

× And it helps me keep my mind organized and help me with my budget.

✓ And it helps me keep my mind organized and helps me with my budget.

Two coordinated verbs share the same subject 'it' so both verbs must be in the same form: 'helps' and 'helps' (or use 'help' if subject were 'they'). The original used 'helps' then 'help', causing parallelism error. Suggestion: use parallel verb forms.

× I definitely make a list for my work, umm, if it was umm, my housework or my studies or anything that's related to umm, my personal life, I would really do a list for it.

✓ I definitely make a list for my work. If it is my housework or my studies or anything related to my personal life, I will really make a list for it.

The original mixes present habitual 'I definitely make' with conditional past 'if it was' and modal 'would', causing tense inconsistency. Use present simple for general conditions ('if it is ...') and 'will' or present simple for habitual actions, and use 'make a list' (not 'do a list'). Suggestion: keep tenses consistent and use 'make' rather than 'do' for lists.

× And yes, it does work 99% of the time.

✓ And yes, it works 99% of the time.

With subject 'it' the simple present 'works' is standard for habitual facts; 'does work' is emphatic but acceptable. Correction simplifies to normal present tense. Suggestion: use 'works' for neutral statements, or keep 'does work' for emphasis.

× They wanna do it when they want to do it without creating a list.

✓ They want to do things when they want to do them without creating a list.

'wanna' is informal and 'it' as object is vague; use 'want to' and pluralize to match 'people' (they) with 'things' and 'them'. Suggestion: avoid slang and ensure pronouns refer clearly to plural nouns.

× And some people are lazy to do a list because if they would, they wouldn't actually do the things that they said they would do on the list.

✓ And some people are too lazy to make a list because even if they did, they wouldn't actually do the things they said they would on the list.

'Lazy to do a list' is unidiomatic; use 'too lazy to make a list'. Conditional 'if they would' is incorrect; use 'if they did' or 'even if they did'. Also streamline repeated 'would do'. Suggestion: use correct conditional structure and idiomatic verbs ('make a list').

× I don't mind making a list on paper or on my phone, but I often do my To Do List on my phone since I have it and I carry it all the time with me.

✓ I don't mind making a list on paper or on my phone, but I often make my to-do list on my phone since I have it and carry it with me all the time.

Use 'make' rather than 'do' for lists. 'Carry it all the time with me' has redundant preposition 'with'; use 'carry it with me' or 'carry it all the time'. Also 'To Do List' can be lowercased. Suggestion: correct verb choice and simplify prepositional phrase.

× I'm not gonna carry the paper wherever I go, so I'm gonna do it on my phone instead, but I'm happy with both.

✓ I'm not going to carry paper wherever I go, so I'll make the list on my phone instead, but I'm happy with both.

Use formal 'going to' instead of 'gonna' in standard writing. Use 'carry paper' (no article) and 'make the list' rather than 'do it' for clarity. Use 'I'll' (or 'I'm going to') for future decision. Suggestion: avoid colloquial contractions and use appropriate verbs and articles.