鞋子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的で内容も伝わりますが、流暢さと統一感、言い換えの自然さを改善してください。具体的には、口頭の「あいまいな語（umm, or something）」を減らし、頻度を表す語を一語で明確に述べ、理由を簡潔に続けましょう。また、文は最大5文に収め、つながりを示す接続語（because / so / therefore）を適切に使うと良いです。発音やイントネーションで自信を持って話す練習も行ってください。

範例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often. I usually buy new shoes once or twice a year because they are quite expensive.

建議: 文法と語順に注意が必要です。不自然な条件節（if I bought shoes online）は避け、単純な否定文と続ける理由を明確に述べましょう。また、“online”は副詞なので前置詞の使い方（online / on the internet）や「試着する」「サイズが合うか確かめる」の表現を正確に使い分けてください。接続語（because / so）で理由を滑らかにつなぐとより自然です。

範例: No, I haven't. I prefer not to buy shoes online because I can't try them on and I'm not sure if the size will fit me.

建議: 内容は伝わりますが、時制、一貫性、語彙選択で改善が必要です。まず現在の通常の出費を表すときは現在形を使い、過去形（I spent）を避けましょう。'Sanders'はおそらく'sandals'か'Sanders（ブランド）'の誤りかもしれないので、正しい語を使ってください。金額の表現や比較をする際は接続語（for, while, however）を自然に使い分け、冗長な言葉（umm）を減らしましょう。

範例: It depends on the type of shoes. I usually spend about ¥10,000 on running shoes, but I try to spend less on casual sandals.

建議: 主張は明確ですが、文法と表現の自然さを改善してください。'It's because'の後は理由を簡潔に述べ、'need'や'learn'の誤用を直しましょう（おそらく 'run'）。'want my shoes comfortable'は不自然なので、'want my shoes to be comfortable' と不定詞を使ってください。理由を2点以上挙げる場合は接続詞（because / also / moreover）で論理的につなげましょう。

範例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I like running, so comfort is more important to me. Also, I want my shoes to feel supportive during long walks.

× Yes I do. I like buying shoes, but I don't often buy shoes. I buy shoes umm, once or half a year or something like that because it's not cheap.

✓ Yes, I do. I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often. I buy shoes, umm, once every six months or so because they're not cheap.

Subject uses present habits and general statements, so simple present is required: 'don't buy' not 'don't often buy' (placement clarity) and use object pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Use 'once every six months' for natural frequency and plural 'they're' to refer to shoes. Suggestions: place adverb 'often' after auxiliary (don't often buy -> don't buy often) or use 'don't buy them often'; use consistent plural references and more natural time expressions.

× No, I have not if I bought shoes online. This is because at online I cannot try on new shoes and I cannot know the exact size of shoes.

✓ No, I have not bought shoes online. This is because online I cannot try on new shoes and I cannot know the exact size.

The student tried to use present perfect but added an incorrect 'if I bought' clause. Simple present perfect 'have not bought' is correct. 'At online' is wrong preposition and word order; use 'online'. For ability to know size, use present simple with 'know' rather than 'cannot know' is acceptable, but drop repeated 'of shoes' and use 'the exact size' or 'their exact size'. Suggestions: use 'have not bought' for experience, use 'online' without a preposition, and avoid redundant nouns.

× MMM it depends on what shoes I buy for. For running shoes I spent almost umm ¥10,000 and but for the Sanders I want save more money.

✓ It depends on what shoes I buy them for. For running shoes I spend almost ¥10,000, but for sandals I want to save more money.

Mix of present and past tenses: when talking about usual spending, use simple present 'I spend' not past 'I spent'. Also fix word order: 'what shoes I buy them for' or better 'what I am buying them for'. 'Sanders' is likely 'sandals'; use 'want to save' with 'to' before verb. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (present for habits), correct vocabulary (sandals), and include 'to' with 'want to'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes. It's because I like running so I think it's need more comfortable to learn and also I want my shoes comfortable.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones. It's because I like running, so I think I need more comfortable shoes for running, and I also want my shoes to be comfortable.

Several issues: use 'ones' to avoid repetition; 'it's because' is acceptable but combine sentences with commas. 'I think it's need' is wrong structure — use 'I think I need'. Missing preposition/infinitive: 'for running' or 'to run' and 'want my shoes to be comfortable' requires 'to be'. Suggestions: use subject + verb ('I need'), include appropriate prepositions ('for running'), and use 'to be' after 'want' when describing state.