聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Réduisez les hésitations et la redondance; commencez par une phrase claire pour répondre directement, puis donnez un ou deux détails précis. Par exemple, évitez les répétitions («uh», «about») et organisez l'information: plateforme utilisée + but des échanges. Travaillez la fluidité en pratiquant des réponses préparées courtes (1–2 phrases) puis développez si nécessaire.

範例: Yes, I do. I often chat with friends on WhatsApp and Instagram to share ideas and to ask about their daily routines or problems. For instance, I usually message a close friend in the evening to check how their day went.

建議: Clarifiez et organisez vos thèmes: dites d'abord le sujet principal, puis utilisez des mots précis et des connecteurs (for example, also, sometimes). Évitez les expressions vagues («like», «some deals»). Donnez un exemple concret pour illustrer ce que vous partagez.

範例: Mostly we talk about studying and our future goals. We also share useful resources, such as lecture notes or interesting videos — for example, I often send a motivational TED talk to my classmates.

建議: Répondez clairement à la question puis expliquez la raison avec un connecteur (because, so). Evitez les contradictions et les confusions dans la première phrase. Par exemple, dites d'abord la préférence (one friend), puis expliquez pourquoi en donnant un exemple précis.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one close friend because group chats often distract me and sometimes create stress. For example, in a group chat I find it hard to follow important messages about plans or study sessions.

建議: Commencez par une réponse directe (I prefer...), puis utilisez une raison claire avec un exemple. Améliorez la grammaire (face-to-face, reactions) et supprimez les mots inutiles («and so on»). Employez un lien logique (because, for example).

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read people's emotions and react immediately. For example, when discussing a sensitive topic, seeing someone's facial expressions helps me respond more appropriately.

建議: Répondez directement et développez avec un exemple concret. Évitez les coupures et répéter des mots («about»). Utilisez des connecteurs pour lister les sujets (about goals, plans, or studies) et expliquez brièvement pourquoi ces discussions arrivent.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my close friends, usually about goals, plans, or study methods, because we care about each other's progress. For instance, we once argued about how to divide tasks for a group project and then agreed on a fair schedule.

× I like chatting with my friends, like uh, in Instagram or WhatsApp for sharing my idea or ask, uh, or ask them about, uh, about their daily, daily routine or, uh, their problems.

✓ I like chatting with my friends on Instagram or WhatsApp to share my ideas or ask them about their daily routines or problems.

The sentence combines incorrect verb forms and prepositions. Use the gerund 'chatting' correctly with the preposition 'on' for platforms (preposition issue). Use the infinitive 'to share' rather than 'for sharing' for purpose and use the base verb 'ask' with the infinitive or parallel structure. Use plural 'ideas' and 'daily routines' to match meaning. Suggestion: use parallel structure (to share... or to ask...) and correct prepositions.

× I usually chat, uh, with my friends, like about, uh, sometimes studying and uh, dreams or goals, but sometimes, uh, we need like to love, like share, uh, some deals or some, uh, videos.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about studying, dreams or goals, and sometimes we like to share deals or videos.

The original has redundant fillers and incorrect/misplaced prepositions. Remove filler words and use 'about' once for topics. Use the infinitive 'to share' or verb phrase 'we like to share' for clarity. 'Need like to love' is incorrect; likely intended 'sometimes we like to share'. Keep nouns parallel: 'deals or videos.' Suggestion: simplify and maintain parallel structure.

× I think, uh, with a close friend, it's better to chat with a group, uh, of people because group can distract me and, uh, give me like a negative, uh, energy sometimes and that's, uh, not helpful.

✓ I think chatting with a close friend is better than chatting with a group of people because a group can distract me and sometimes give me negative energy, which is not helpful.

Pronoun and article issues: use 'a group' or 'the group' consistently; 'group' alone is missing an article. Replace 'it's better to chat with a group of people' (unclear comparison) with 'is better than chatting with a group' for correct comparison. Remove filler 'like' and reorder adjectives: 'negative energy' not 'a negative energy' unless countable. Suggestion: use articles consistently and clear comparative structure.

× It depends, but I think face to face it's better than the the communicates and so on social media because face to face you can see the emotion for others and to reacts, you know.

✓ It depends, but I think face-to-face communication is better than communication on social media because face-to-face you can see others' emotions and react to them.

Preposition and article errors: use 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective or noun; use 'communication on social media' rather than 'the communicates and so on social media.' 'See the emotion for others' should be 'see others' emotions' (possessive). 'To reacts' is wrong form; use base verb 'react' or 'react to them.' Suggestion: use correct hyphenation, prepositions ('on social media'), possessive form, and verb forms.

× I argue only with my close friends because, uh. I argue with them about uh goals or about plan or about studying that.

✓ I only argue with my close friends because I argue with them about goals, plans, or studying.

The sentence has fragmented punctuation and redundant repetition. Place 'only' before verb for correct emphasis: 'I only argue with...' Use plurals 'goals' and 'plans' for consistency. Remove trailing 'that' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: keep one clear sentence, use plural nouns for general meaning, and avoid sentence fragments.