聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak more fluently and reduce hesitations (“umm”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details. Avoid repeating the same idea (e.g., “recharge” and “relaxing”) and finish the answer in no more than four sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me catch up with their news and relax. For example, we often share funny stories from our week and talk about plans, which always brightens my mood.

建議: Be specific and organized: give one or two topic categories and provide a brief example. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g., “gossip” instead of “gossips that is”). Use linking words like “for example” to make it coherent.

範例: We usually talk about what happened during the week and our personal lives. For example, we’ll discuss work or school updates and sometimes light gossip about mutual friends or local events.

建議: Answer directly with a clear preference or explain both options concisely. Remove hesitations and complete sentences properly. Use linking words like “however” to contrast group vs one-on-one situations.

範例: It depends on the situation: I enjoy group chats when I’m energetic because they’re lively, but I prefer one-on-one conversations for private or serious topics.

建議: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement of preference, give one or two reasons, and finish cleanly. Correct small grammar issues and remove filler words.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it more personal and easier than typing long messages. For instance, when we meet in person we can talk for hours and read each other’s expressions.

建議: Provide a concise direct answer then support with a specific example and a reason. Remove unsure phrasing like “I think” and unnecessary words. Use one linking phrase such as “because” to explain why arguments are rare.

範例: Not often. The last serious fight was about five years ago because we had a misunderstanding, but since then we resolve issues calmly by talking them through.

× Having a conversation with my friends umm full umm recharge my.

✓ Having a conversation with my friends fully recharges me.

The student attempted to use 'recharge' as a base verb where a present tense third-person singular form or participle structure is needed. 'Having a conversation...' is a gerund phrase functioning as subject, so the verb should agree and the reflexive object should be 'me'. Use the adverb 'fully' before the verb and change 'recharge' to 'recharges' to match subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'fully recharges me' or 'recharges me fully'.

× It's my way of relaxing and also recharge since this way we are able to catch up with each other, have some fun stories, tell some fun stories and.

✓ It's my way of relaxing and also recharging, since this way we are able to catch up with each other and tell some fun stories.

After 'way of' and in parallel structure with 'relaxing', the verb should be in '-ing' form: 'recharging'. Also the sentence had redundant phrases and an incomplete ending. Combine ideas with 'and' and use 'tell some fun stories' once. Suggestion: keep parallel gerunds and complete the list clearly.

× So we usually chat about anything about what happened UMM last within the week, what happened with UMM, with our lives for that specific time, or about gossips that is currently UMM currently gossips that they know about.

✓ So we usually chat about anything that happened last week, about what is going on in our lives at that time, or about gossip that they have heard.

The original sentence misuses 'about' twice and has awkward time expressions. Use 'last week' or 'during the week' instead of 'last within the week'. 'Gossip' is uncountable, so use singular 'gossip' or 'gossip stories'. Also replace 'is currently UMM currently gossips that they know about' with 'they have heard' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify time phrases and use correct noun form for 'gossip'.

× It depends. If I want to umm if I have the energy to have a conversation with a big or huge amount of people it I can.

✓ It depends. If I have the energy to talk with a large group of people, I can.

The sentence repeats 'if' and has awkward noun phrase 'a big or huge amount of people' (use 'number' or 'group' for people). Remove filler words and streamline structure: 'If I have the energy to talk with a large group of people, I can.' Suggestion: use 'a large group of people' or 'many people'.

× But if it is something private or I want to talk about only, I want to talk only with a certain person I am.

✓ But if it's something private or I only want to talk about something with one person, I prefer to speak with that person alone.

This sentence is disfluent and repeated phrases 'I want to talk only'. The position of 'only' is incorrect. Reorder to 'I only want to talk...with one person' or better: 'I prefer to speak with that person alone.' Suggestion: place 'only' next to the element it modifies and avoid repetition.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than social media since I am too lazy to type a long conversation with my friends since But umm in face to face we can we communicate for about two hours or more than that because we like talking with each other.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media, because I'm too lazy to type long messages. In face-to-face meetings we can talk for about two hours or more because we enjoy talking with each other.

Use 'via social media' rather than 'social media' alone. Remove repeated 'since' and fix 'type a long conversation' to 'type long messages' or 'type long conversations'. 'In face to face' should be 'In face-to-face meetings' or 'Face to face'. Suggestion: break into two sentences for clarity and use 'via' with communication channels.

× I don't really argue with friends and the last time that we had a huge fight was when we, as I think five years ago, so recently we never really had a miscommunication with each other because we talk about things calmly and more maturely.

✓ I don't really argue with my friends; the last time we had a big fight was, I think, five years ago. Recently we haven't had misunderstandings because we talk about things calmly and more maturely.

Tense and word choice issues: 'we never really had' conflicts with 'the last time was five years ago' — use present perfect 'haven't had' for recent period. 'Miscommunication' is better as 'misunderstandings'. Replace 'we talk' with 'we discuss' or 'we talk' in present simple is okay but pair with 'haven't had' for consistency. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions in a period up to now and use clearer nouns like 'misunderstandings'.