走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (use present simple for routine) and avoid filler words. For example, say why you don’t walk and mention any short walks you do.

範例: No, I don’t walk much because I commute to work by train every morning. However, I sometimes walk short distances from my apartment to the station, which takes about five minutes.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and use correct past tense forms. Avoid repetition (don’t say 'used to' twice) and give specific activities with linking words. Keep it within 2–3 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I often played outside with my mother and friends; for example, we played soccer and chased each other in the park almost every afternoon.

建議: Answer directly and use clear reasons with correct vocabulary. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid unclear phrases like 'no currents'. Give specific benefits of parks (fresh air, safety, space).

範例: People like walking in parks because they are safe and peaceful. For example, parks usually have wide paths without heavy traffic, fresh air, and space to relax, so families and runners feel comfortable there.

建議: Make your conditional answer clear and relevant to walking. Use the correct conditional form and avoid repeating words. Explain why that place is appealing for a long walk with one or two supporting reasons.

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Korea because I’m visiting there in May. I’d enjoy walking through historic streets and gardens with my husband to see the cherry blossoms and local scenery.

建議: Use simple past for a past action and clear vocabulary (e.g., 'walked' not 'invoked'). Start with a direct answer naming the place, then add a brief detail about frequency or duration using linking words.

範例: Recently I walked from my apartment to the train station. It’s a short walk of about five minutes, and I do it almost every morning before taking the train.

× No, I don't because I commit the company to work every morning.

✓ No, I don't because I commute to the company to work every morning.

The student used 'commit' which is incorrect. The correct verb is 'commute' meaning to travel to work. This is a word choice/verb form error; use 'commute' in present simple for habitual action: 'I commute to the company every morning.' Suggestion: Learn commonly confused verbs and use present simple for routines.

× Uh, not.

✓ No, I don't.

'Uh, not' is incomplete and ungrammatical. It should repeat the negative response with the auxiliary verb for clarity: 'No, I don't.' Suggestion: Use full negative responses (subject + auxiliary + main verb) in spoken answers.

× I write on the train, but I walk until the.

✓ I write on the train, but I walk a little when I get off.

The phrase 'walk until the.' is incomplete and 'until the' lacks an object. Also 'walk a little when I get off' correctly expresses a short walk after leaving the train. Use complete clause structures. Suggestion: Complete prepositional phrases and use clear time/place expressions.

× Yes I did because I used to used to do play outside with my mother or my friend because I like played a soccer or chasing with other people's.

✓ Yes, I did because I used to play outside with my mother or my friends because I liked playing soccer or chasing other people.

Several errors: 'used to used to do play' is redundant; use single 'used to' + base verb: 'used to play.' 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' if referring to more than one. 'I like played' mixes tenses—use past 'liked' to match 'used to.' 'Playing soccer' uses gerund after 'liked.' 'Chasing other people's' is incorrect possessive; use 'chasing other people.' Suggestion: Use 'used to' + base verb for past habits, match verb tense, and use gerunds after 'like' when talking about activities.

× I think park is can be safety because no currents and no bicycles and I can say a lot of people so they can.

✓ I think the park can be safe because there are no cars and no bicycles, and I can say there are a lot of people so they can feel safe.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'park' when speaking about parks in general context here. 'Can be safety' incorrect adjective; use 'safe.' 'No currents' is likely wrong word—'cars' fits context. 'I can say a lot of people so they can' is incomplete; clarify 'there are a lot of people so they can feel safe.' Also add 'there are' for existence. Suggestion: Use 'the' for specific places, choose correct nouns (cars), and complete ideas with clauses like 'so they can feel safe.' Use 'safe' as adjective.

× I would like to work in Korea because I'm going to there in May.

✓ I would like to work in Korea because I'm going there in May.

Incorrect use of 'going to there' — 'there' should follow the verb without 'to' when using 'go' + place, or use 'going to' + place: 'I'm going there' or 'I'm going to Korea.' Also 'would like to work' is fine for conditional desire; present continuous 'I'm going' for future plan is correct. Suggestion: Use correct 'go' patterns: 'go to [place]' or 'go there'.

× I I'm going to go there with my husband, my husband.

✓ I'm going to go there with my husband.

Repetition 'my husband, my husband' is unnecessary. Also contraction 'I I'm' has duplication. Remove duplicates for fluency. Suggestion: Avoid repeating words; keep sentences concise.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

The examiner's sentence 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' is slightly odd; 'lately' is usually used with present perfect. For simple past 'recently' fits better. However if correcting student's response, use 'recently' to ask past action. (This entry notes appropriate adverb choice.) Suggestion: Use 'recently' with simple past and 'lately' with present perfect.

× I invoked it to the station from my apartment because I use the train every morning, but it's short time I think.

✓ I walked to the station from my apartment because I use the train every morning, but it's a short walk, I think.

'Invoked' is wrong word choice; likely meant 'walked' or 'went' — use 'walked to the station.' 'It's short time' should be 'it's a short walk.' Ensure noun 'walk' after 'short.' Keep tense consistent: 'walked' for past action; 'I use the train every morning' present simple for habit is fine. Suggestion: Choose correct verbs for movements (walked, went), and use noun phrases like 'a short walk.'