食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct tense and articles, avoid redundant phrases, and link ideas smoothly. Make one clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details with linking words and a concise reason or example. Watch for small errors: "tasted" → "tastes", "it's affordable price" → "it's affordable" or "it's reasonably priced".

範例: My favourite food is fried rice because it tastes great and is quick to prepare. For example, I usually make it three or four times a week since it uses leftovers and is reasonably priced, so it fits my budget and busy schedule.

建議: Clarify and condense the response: start with a topic sentence, then give a specific reason and one example. Avoid repetition ("so" used many times) and use more appropriate vocabulary ("father" or "dad", "lollies" → "candies").

範例: When I was young, I loved sweets because my dad enjoyed snacks a lot. For instance, he often had cookies and chocolate at home, so I followed him and preferred candies to regular meals.

建議: Make the answer complete and structured: give a clear topic sentence, then contrast winter and summer with linking words like "in contrast" or "whereas". Avoid unfinished phrases (remove "because if") and use precise examples and reasons for the choices (e.g., weather-related comfort).

範例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In winter I prefer hot dishes, such as Chinese hot pot or creamy soups, because they keep me warm, whereas in summer I choose cold noodles or salads to feel refreshed.

建議: Tighten the response and use smoother linking: begin with a direct statement, then explain the change with cause and a specific example. Replace repetitive words and improve tense consistency.

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I couldn't tolerate spicy food and usually ate plain pasta or rice, but as I grew up I tried spicy dishes and now I really enjoy spicy cuisine, such as kimchi stew or hot curry.

× My favorite food is fried rice because it's easy to make and tasted really good.

✓ My favorite food is fried rice because it's easy to make and tastes really good.

The clause refers to a general present fact, so verbs should be in the simple present. 'Tasted' is past tense; replace with 'tastes' to agree with 'is' and express a habitual or general truth.

× Also it's affordable price.

✓ Also, it's affordable.

The phrase 'affordable price' is redundant and missing an article if kept as a noun phrase. Saying 'it's affordable' is natural and grammatically correct. Alternatively, 'it has an affordable price' would require the article 'an'.

× I normally make fried rice actually like 3 to 4 times in a week.

✓ I normally make fried rice about three to four times a week.

Use 'about' instead of 'like' for approximations, spell out numbers in speech contexts, and omit the unnecessary article 'in' before 'a week'. Present simple 'make' is correct.

× It's really good for me.

✓ It's really good for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct but vague. Consider specifying what 'good for me' means (e.g., 'It's really convenient for me' or 'It's really healthy for me') for clarity.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> I used to like sweets because my daddy was really sweet person so he always ate cookies, chocolate, lollies so I was following him so I ate sweets rather than normal food.

✓ I used to like sweets because my dad was a very sweet person, so he always ate cookies, chocolate and lollipops. I followed him, so I ate sweets instead of regular food.

Use 'dad' instead of colloquial 'daddy' in formal speaking. 'Really sweet person' needs an article: 'a very sweet person'. 'Lollies' is informal regional; 'lollipops' or 'candies' are clearer. Use 'followed him' or 'I followed his example' rather than 'I was following him so I ate'. Use 'instead of' rather than 'rather than' after 'ate' for clearer comparison. Past habitual 'used to' is correct.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? -> Yes, I eat different food in different times of the year because in winter time I prefer eating like hot food, for example Chinese hot pot or just creamy soup, whereas I eat cold noodles in summer time because if.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because in winter I prefer hot food, for example Chinese hot pot or creamy soups, whereas in summer I eat cold noodles.

Use plural 'foods' to match 'different'. Use 'at different times of the year' not 'in'. Omit 'time' after seasons: say 'in winter' and 'in summer'. Remove filler 'like' before examples. 'Creamy soup' should be pluralized if speaking generally. The sentence ended with an incomplete clause 'because if' which must be removed.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> Yes, it changed because when I was a child I couldn't eat any spicy food, so I was always just plain pasta, plain rice without spicy things.

✓ Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I couldn't eat spicy food, so I always had plain pasta or plain rice without spicy ingredients.

Responding to 'Has...changed' uses present perfect: 'It has changed' rather than simple past 'it changed'. 'Couldn't eat any spicy food' is okay but 'any' is unnecessary. Use 'always had' to indicate habitual past. 'Spicy things' is informal; use 'spicy ingredients'.

× But while I was growing up, I tried to eat spicy food and then I love spicy food these days.

✓ But while I was growing up I tried spicy food, and now I love spicy food.

Sequence: past habit 'while I was growing up I tried spicy food' (simple past) is fine; follow-up describing current state should use present simple 'now I love spicy food' rather than 'then I love'. Also streamline 'tried to eat' to 'tried' if meaning sampled.

× So definitely it's changed.

✓ So, it has definitely changed.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to answer the present perfect question. Place adverb 'definitely' appropriately (before the past participle or after 'has').