建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise. Start with a simple direct sentence answering the question, avoid unrelated words (e.g. “Innocent”, “cornstarch”), use correct grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement) and one or two specific details. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you add detail.

範例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a modern condominium complex and an office tower about five minutes away, so the skyline is quite prominent from my window.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Use correct noun/verb forms and simpler phrasing (e.g. “various shapes,” “unusual”).

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing buildings because their shapes and details are interesting. For example, I often take pictures of a nearby museum with a curved façade because it looks very different from regular rectangular buildings.

建議: Answer directly with a correct verb (e.g. “visit” not “resist”) and a clear reason. Mention the building’s name or location and give one specific feature you want to see. Avoid unclear phrases like “not lean to the floor.”

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Apple flagship store downtown because its glass cube design is remarkable. I want to see the interior staircase and how the building’s structure creates an open, airy space.

建議: Provide a direct answer and then one or two clear reasons using linking words such as “because” and “however.” Be careful with sentence punctuation and plural/singular forms. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I feel safer in a low-rise home. However, I sometimes enjoy visiting high floors to admire the view.

× Yes. Innocent. Yeah, the condominium are cornstarch nearby my house.

✓ Yes. Actually, the condominiums are located near my house.

The sentence has several issues: 'Innocent' is irrelevant and likely a misuse; 'condominium' should be plural 'condominiums' to match context (number agreement); 'are cornstarch' is meaningless and should be replaced with 'are located' to show position; 'nearby my house' is incorrect preposition use — use 'near my house'. Suggestion: remove irrelevant words, make noun and verb agree in number, use appropriate verb for location and correct preposition. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× So right now there's are several tall building around here.

✓ So right now there are several tall buildings around here.

The phrase incorrectly combines 'there's' and 'are' (redundant and ungrammatical). Use 'there are' for plural existence. Also 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'several'. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× Yes I do. I love to capture a various shape of building, especially the outstanding one that not similar with the regular building.

✓ Yes I do. I love to capture various shapes of buildings, especially outstanding ones that are not similar to regular buildings.

Errors: 'a various shape' mixes singular article with 'various' (which requires plural noun) — use 'various shapes'; 'building' should be plural when speaking generally; 'the outstanding one' is vague and should be plural to match context; 'that not similar with' lacks verb and uses wrong preposition — correct to 'that are not similar to'. Suggestion: use plural nouns with 'various', include the verb 'are', and use 'similar to'. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× Yes, I would love to resist the iPhone tower because I think it's incredible that's not lean to the floor.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit the iPhone Tower because I think it's incredible that it doesn't lean to the ground.

Multiple issues: 'resist' is the wrong verb (means to oppose); the correct verb is 'visit'. 'iPhone tower' should be capitalized as a name 'iPhone Tower'. 'that's not lean to the floor' is ungrammatical: use 'that it doesn't lean' (negative auxiliary + infinitive) and 'to the ground' or 'toward the ground' rather than 'to the floor'. Suggestion: choose correct verb, use proper noun capitalization, include auxiliary for negative, and use correct preposition/object. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× No I don't because I feel safe to stay in the low rise building but sometime I love to see the view from the tall building.

✓ No, I don't because I feel safer staying in a low-rise building, but sometimes I like to see the view from a tall building.

Corrections: add comma after 'No'; comparative 'safe' should be 'safer' when comparing options; 'to stay' is acceptable but 'staying' is more natural here; 'low rise' should be hyphenated 'low-rise' and typically preceded by an article 'a'; 'sometime' (meaning 'at some time') is wrong — use 'sometimes' (meaning 'occasionally'); 'I love to see' is okay but 'I like to see' fits contrast better. Suggestion: use comparative form when comparing, hyphenate compound adjectives, use correct adverb 'sometimes', and include appropriate articles. Grammar problem type ID: 2