打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct collocations (e.g. “time-saving”, “for many purposes”, “organize my thoughts”).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s more convenient and time-saving. For example, I use a keyboard daily to write emails and messages, and it helps me organize my thoughts more quickly.

建議: Begin with a direct answer (laptop or desktop), then give a brief reason with natural phrasing. Remove awkward or redundant expressions (e.g. “in the advent of era”). Use one linking phrase like “because” or “so” and avoid repeating words.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because it’s portable. For instance, I can slip it into my laptop bag and work while traveling.

建議: Answer with clear timeline and concise language. Use correct tense and natural phrases for schooling (e.g. “7th grade”, “10th grade”). Link the two points with a word like “then” or “by” and avoid vague phrases like “basic thing”.

範例: I started learning keyboard basics in 7th grade, and by 10th grade I was completely comfortable typing.

建議: Organize the response: state methods clearly with linking words (first, also). Use correct articles and plural forms, and be specific about how you practice and what feedback you get. Limit to two or three concise sentences.

範例: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop every day. I also watch tutorial videos and use online typing tests that give instant feedback on speed and accuracy.

× 'Definitely I prefer typing because it is more convenient and time saving than handwriting.'

✓ 'I definitely prefer typing because it is more convenient and time-saving than handwriting.'

'Adverb placement and compound adjective: add "definitely" after subject for natural word order and hyphenate "time-saving" as a compound adjective modifying the noun. Also maintain consistent present simple tense.'

× 'Additionally, I use it my daily life for many purpose such as e-mail, message and taking notes.'

✓ 'Additionally, I use it in my daily life for many purposes such as email, messaging, and taking notes.'

'Preposition missing: add "in" before "my daily life." Number agreement and word choice: change "purpose" to plural "purposes." Use consistent noun forms: "email" (or "emails") and "messaging." Use commas to separate items.'

× 'So I find it is so quicker and easy, easier to organize my thought.'

✓ 'So I find it much quicker and easier to organize my thoughts.'

'Comparative adverb/adjective use: remove redundant "so" and use "much" to modify "quicker." Use parallel adjectives "quicker and easier." Pluralize "thoughts." Also omit the extra "easier." Maintain natural phrasing.'

× 'Well, in the advent of era I have a new type of technology, so I use a laptop for a typing purpose because it is very easy to carry and I can comfortably carry my laptop in my laptop bag and do traveling.'

✓ 'Well, with the advent of the era of new technology, I use a laptop for typing because it is easy to carry, and I can comfortably put it in my laptop bag when I travel.'

'Preposition and article use: use "with the advent of" and include "the." Phrase structure: "the era of new technology" is clearer. Remove unnecessary article before "typing" and change "for a typing purpose" to "for typing." Avoid repeating "carry" and use "put it in my laptop bag when I travel." Use present simple tense.'

× 'I really remember when I was in my 7th standard on that time I learned about the basic thing about related to keyboard.'

✓ 'I really remember that when I was in seventh grade I learned the basic things related to the keyboard.'

'Register and tense: use "seventh grade" instead of "7th standard" for natural English. Remove redundant time phrase "on that time." Use plural "things" and correct word order "related to the keyboard." Present simple "I remember" with past action is fine.'

× 'But when I was in a tenth standard on that time, I become completely familiar with the keyboard.'

✓ 'But when I was in tenth grade, I became completely familiar with the keyboard.'

'Past tense agreement: use past simple "became" not "become" to match the past time reference. Remove redundant "on that time" and use "tenth grade." Maintain article omission before grade.'

× 'Well, I do a several thing in order to become a expert in a typing.'

✓ 'Well, I do several things in order to become an expert at typing.'

'Quantifier and article use: do not use "a" before "several." Use plural "things." Use article "an" before a vowel sound in "expert." Use "at typing" or "in typing" — "at typing" is more natural.'

× 'Firstly I do I do practice in my daily life with my laptop.'

✓ 'Firstly, I practice every day on my laptop.'

'Redundancy and adverb placement: remove duplicated "I do" and use "practice" as a verb. Use "every day" for daily frequency and place it before or after verb as appropriate. Add comma after introductory adverb "Firstly." Use present simple.'

× 'Apart from this I watch a tutorial as well as do online practice where I can get a feedback in a few.'

✓ 'Apart from this, I watch tutorials and do online practice where I can get feedback quickly.'

'Article and count noun use: use plural "tutorials" or "a tutorial" consistently. Remove article before "feedback" (uncountable). Replace vague "in a few" with "quickly" or "in a few minutes." Add comma after introductory phrase.'