打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a complete, natural response that directly answers and briefly explains why. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail; avoid sentence fragments. For example, say why typing is preferred (speed, neatness, convenience) and include a brief specific reason.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and neater. For instance, when I type reports at work I can finish them more quickly and edit mistakes easily.

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then add one specific supporting detail using a linking phrase. Reduce filler words and avoid awkward phrasing.

範例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work in administration. For example, even small tasks like filing emails require me to use the office desktop.

建議: Use past tense for completed past events and streamline details. Begin with a clear time reference, then add one or two specific supporting details (where and how you learned). Avoid repetition and incorrect collocations like “keywords” for words per minute.

範例: I learned to type when I was in first grade at school, where we had a computer class that taught basic typing. Later, during my office administration coursework I took a typing module that focused on speed and accuracy.

建議: Answer clearly about current or ongoing methods to improve typing, using correct vocabulary (e.g., 'words per minute') and a linking word to show progression. Mention a specific practice or tool and a measurable result if possible.

範例: I improved my typing two years ago by using a typing application in my coursework that focused on speed and accuracy. As a result, my words-per-minute rate increased significantly after regular practice.

× I prefer typing because.

✓ I prefer typing.

The sentence ends with 'because' which requires a clause to complete the reason. This is a sentence structure error; remove the dangling 'because' or add a full clause (for example, 'because it is faster') to complete the thought.

× As I do administration job, I am needed to type on desktop keyboard every day.

✓ As I do an administration job, I need to type on a desktop keyboard every day.

Missing indefinite article 'an' before 'administration job' and incorrect passive/obligatory construction 'am needed to' should be active 'need to'. Also add 'a' before 'desktop keyboard'. These corrections fix article usage and verb form to match natural English.

× Uh, even my smallest to smallest task I turn on keyboard.

✓ Even for my smallest tasks, I use the keyboard.

Phrase 'smallest to smallest task' is incorrect and awkward; use plural 'tasks' and a prepositional phrase 'for my smallest tasks'. 'I turn on keyboard' is unnatural—use 'I use the keyboard'. This corrects word choice and adjective/adverb usage.

× I am being trained typing on keyboard since I was in grade one.

✓ I have been trained to type on the keyboard since I was in grade one.

Use present perfect continuous or present perfect passive for actions from the past continuing to present: 'have been trained'. Also 'typing on keyboard' should be 'to type on the keyboard'. Include articles and correct verb form for duration 'since'.

× In our school there used to be a computer subject and they used to teach us typing on the keyboard.

✓ At our school there used to be a computer subject, and they used to teach us typing on the keyboard.

Minor preposition issue: use 'At our school' rather than 'In our school' for institutions. The rest is acceptable; comma added for clarity.

× And also in my coursework in office administration, health services, I had a special subject for typing that focuses on the speed of your typing, how many keywords you can.

✓ Also, in my coursework in office administration and health services, I had a special subject for typing that focused on typing speed, such as how many keystrokes or words per minute you can achieve.

Tense should be past 'focused' to match 'I had'. 'How many keywords you can' is incomplete and inaccurate; use 'how many keystrokes or words per minute you can achieve'. Also fix list punctuation and word choice.

× Honestly saying, my typing improved 2 years ago when I had a typing subject in my coursework.

✓ To be honest, my typing improved two years ago when I had a typing class in my coursework.

'Honestly saying' is unnatural; use 'To be honest'. Write numbers in words in formal speech 'two years ago'. 'Typing subject' better as 'typing class'.

× There used to be a typing application which focused on speed and accuracy and helped me reach a good verse per minute rate.

✓ There used to be a typing application that focused on speed and accuracy and helped me reach a good words-per-minute rate.

'Which' vs 'that' — 'that' is more natural for defining clauses. 'Verse per minute' is incorrect; correct term is 'words per minute'. This fixes word choice and relative clause usage.