视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần sửa lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp cơ bản, tránh từ không phù hợp (ví dụ "Death"), và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó thêm 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với từ nối hợp lý (ví dụ: "because", "for example"). Hạn chế dài dòng thừa, tối đa 3-4 câu. Ví dụ cụ thể và cảm xúc cá nhân sẽ làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and capture memories. For example, when I photograph a landscape, I try to focus on the light and composition to make the moment memorable.

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (chủ-động và số nhiều), giới thiệu câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lí do yêu thích. Dùng từ nối như "because" hoặc "for example" nhưng sử dụng chính xác. Tránh sai cấu trúc như "it have" và biểu đạt hoàn chỉnh như "when I visit a farmhouse".

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and fresh air. For example, when I visit a farmhouse, I enjoy the rolling fields and quiet country roads, which feel very relaxing.

建議: Cần hoàn thiện câu và tránh để câu dở dang. Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "my country has"), đưa thêm lý do cụ thể và so sánh rõ ràng nếu muốn nói so sánh với nước khác. Dùng liên từ như "because", "for example" và kết luận ngắn gọn. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm sẽ tăng tính thuyết phục.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has a wide variety of beautiful landscapes. For example, the beaches in Da Nang and Phu Quoc are stunning, with clear water and soft sand, so I often choose to explore them rather than traveling abroad.

× Death I enjoy taking pictures of different view.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

The original begins with 'Death' which is likely a misheard or mistyped word; replace with an appropriate response word 'Yes'. 'different view' uses singular 'view' but the student means multiple kinds of views, so use plural 'views'. Also ensure subject 'I' follows the response adverb. Suggestion: start with a short response (Yes/No) then the subject and verb: 'Yes, I enjoy...'.

× When I take pictures of a landscape I it can have me relax and the pictures can help me remember moments.

✓ When I take pictures of a landscape, it can help me relax and the pictures can help me remember moments.

The phrase 'I it can have me relax' is ungrammatical. Use 'it can help me relax' to express the effect. Add a comma after the subordinate clause 'When I take pictures of a landscape'. 'Help' is the correct verb; 'have me relax' is awkward and incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'help someone do something' structure: 'help me relax'.

× I like views in rural areas because in rural areas it have many beautiful landscape, for example when I'm have a farmhouse.

✓ I like views in rural areas because there are many beautiful landscapes; for example, when I have a farmhouse.

Several issues: 'it have' is incorrect subject-verb and pronoun choice; use 'there are' for existence. 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'many'. 'when I'm have a farmhouse' mixes tenses and auxiliary; correct to 'when I have a farmhouse' or better 'when I stay at a farmhouse' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun and correct verb forms.

× I like views in my country because my country have beautiful landscapes.

✓ I like views in my country because my country has beautiful landscapes.

Subject 'my country' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'has' not 'have'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: singular subject with singular verb. Suggestion: check the subject and match verb form: 'country has'.

× For example, there are many beaches in Vietnam and the beaches are more beautiful and.

✓ For example, there are many beaches in Vietnam, and the beaches are very beautiful.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Remove the trailing 'and' and complete the idea. 'more beautiful' requires a comparison object (more beautiful than what) so use 'very beautiful' or complete the comparison. Suggestion: either specify the comparison (e.g., 'more beautiful than those in other countries') or use a non-comparative adjective like 'very beautiful'.