视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Good content and clear idea. Improve naturalness and conciseness: use one clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar (use articles and consistent pluralization), and avoid redundancy by combining sentences with a linking word. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different scenes because a busy street and a quiet mountain each evoke distinct emotions. For example, a bustling market feels energetic while a mountain view feels peaceful, so the variety keeps my photos interesting.

建議: The answer communicates a preference but has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Make a clear topic sentence, fix grammar (articles, plural/singular, word order), and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Aim for natural phrasing: "fewer buildings" not "fewer constructions."

範例: I prefer rural views. There are fewer people and fewer buildings, so the scenery feels calmer and more natural. For example, I like seeing open fields and forests because they are peaceful and less crowded.

建議: The idea is understandable but contains grammar mistakes and negative generalization. Make the topic sentence concise, correct articles and singular/plural forms, and give a specific example or reason using a linking phrase. Avoid absolute statements; instead compare features politely.

範例: I usually prefer views in other countries because many places abroad have more natural landscapes or historic architecture. For instance, I find coastal towns in other countries more picturesque than the heavily built-up areas near my home, so I enjoy traveling to see different scenery.

× I like taking pictures of different views because each scene, such as busy street or a quiet mountain, evokes a different emotion.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because each scene, such as a busy street or a quiet mountain, evokes a different emotion.

The noun phrase 'busy street' is missing the indefinite article 'a'. English generally requires an article before singular, countable nouns. Add 'a' to read 'a busy street'. This makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I prefer views in rural areas since there are limited people compared to urban areas and fewer constructions and urban area is more nature which are interested in.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas since there are fewer people compared to urban areas, fewer buildings, and rural areas are more natural, which I find interesting.

Multiple issues addressed but limited to list types: 'limited people' is unidiomatic and should be 'fewer people' (plural quantifier). 'constructions' is the wrong noun; 'buildings' is natural. 'urban area is more nature' has subject-verb and word choice errors: 'urban area' vs 'rural areas' and 'more natural' is the correct adjective. 'which are interested in' misuses 'which' and 'interested' — needs a subject 'I' and correct participle 'find interesting'. Corrections ensure subject-verb agreement, correct quantifiers, noun choice, and proper clause structure.

× I prefer views in other countries because I believe that my country is surrounded by numerous constructions and buildings, making me think that it is not as beautiful as other country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I believe that my country is surrounded by numerous buildings, which makes me think that it is not as beautiful as other countries.

'constructions and buildings' is repetitive; 'buildings' is sufficient. More importantly, 'other country' lacks an article or plural; here 'other countries' fits the comparison. Also use 'which makes me think' for correct clause linkage. These changes fix article use and make the comparison grammatical and clear.