视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (um, you know), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, so).

範例: Yes, I do. I especially like photographing natural scenes because the light and colors change a lot during the day, which makes each photo unique. For example, I often take pictures of rivers and forests at sunrise to capture the warm colors and mist.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence then two specific reasons with linking words. Remove hesitations and vague phrases. Replace 'unusual' with concrete words (e.g. varied landscapes, open space, traditional buildings).

範例: I prefer rural views. First, the countryside offers varied landscapes like rolling hills and traditional farms that I rarely see in the city. Second, the open space and natural light make it easier to compose interesting photos, so I usually travel outside the city to take pictures.

建議: Respond directly and confidently with a clear reason. Avoid hesitations and finish the sentence fully. Give a concrete example or contrast to strengthen the answer.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I don't see at home. For instance, I once photographed a market in Morocco with colorful textiles and spices, which was completely different from the scenes in my city.

× there are many views and very beautiful scene sceneries you really want to take pictures of.

✓ there are many views and very beautiful scenes you really want to take pictures of.

The word 'sceneries' is not commonly used in plural; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun. The speaker tried to pluralize it and also used 'scene' redundantly. Replace with the countable noun 'scenes' or use 'beautiful scenery'. Suggestion: say 'many views and very beautiful scenes' or 'many beautiful sceneries' -> better: 'many beautiful scenes'.

× I see, I want to take picture of something unusual.

✓ I see, I want to take a picture of something unusual.

The countable noun 'picture' requires an article when singular. Use 'a picture' for one item. Suggestion: include the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns.

× there aren't that much, uh, you know, unusual things.

✓ there aren't that many, uh, you know, unusual things.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'things'. Replace 'much' with 'many'. Suggestion: use 'many' for plural countable nouns.

× So most of the time I take pictures in rural areas.

✓ So most of the time I take pictures in rural areas.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed; present simple tense is appropriate to describe habitual action.

× I would prefer umm in the foreign countries because I could.

✓ I would prefer, um, foreign countries because I could.

The definite article 'the' before 'foreign countries' is unnecessary here. When speaking generally about countries that are not the speaker's own, omit 'the'. Also remove the extra preposition 'in' which is not needed after 'prefer'. Suggestion: say 'prefer foreign countries' or 'prefer to be in foreign countries' depending on intended meaning.

× I can take the picture of umm, my city or my town every day, but uh, I can't in foreign.

✓ I can take pictures of my city or town every day, but I can't when I'm abroad.

Several issues: 'the picture of my city or my town' is awkward — use plural 'pictures of my city or town' for general action. 'I can't in foreign' is ungrammatical; use 'I can't when I'm abroad' or 'I can't do that abroad'. Also 'in foreign' is incorrect prepositional use. Suggestion: use 'abroad' or 'in foreign countries' and match verb forms for parallelism.