视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid incorrect word forms (use 'photographs' or 'photography', not 'photographies') and unclear pronouns. Also keep tense consistent.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me relax. For example, when I travel across the country I photograph landscapes and cityscapes, which helps me remember places and lifts my mood when I feel low.

建議: Answer directly with one clear preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition ('rural rural') and use correct singular/plural and articles. Use varied vocabulary such as 'tranquility' or 'scenery'.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer peace and beautiful natural scenery. For instance, the quiet countryside lets me focus on details like fields and rivers, which feels refreshing compared with crowded cities.

建議: Give a direct answer and avoid filler words ('uh', 'like'). Provide a specific reason and an example. Keep sentences shorter and grammatically correct; use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to structure your response.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultures and landscapes. For example, visiting abroad lets me see architecture and traditions I can't find at home, which broadens my perspective and inspires my photography.

× Yes, I do like to take pictures of different views because I'm really fond of taking photographies and videographies of different places.

✓ Yes, I do like to take pictures of different views because I'm really fond of taking photographs and videos of different places.

The words 'photographies' and 'videographies' are incorrect; the correct plural nouns are 'photographs' and 'videos'. Use common collocations: 'take photographs' and 'take videos' or 'record videos'. Replace rare or uncountable forms with standard plural nouns.

× They're allowed to travel across the country and it will give me relaxation when I was really low.

✓ I am allowed to travel across the country, and it gives me relaxation when I feel very low.

The original sentence uses 'They're' (they are) incorrectly and mixes tenses ('will' with 'was'). The subject should be 'I' (the speaker) and the tense consistent: present simple 'gives' and 'feel' to describe habitual or general effects. Use 'feel very low' instead of 'was really low' for present reference.

× I would say I would prefer views from rural rural areas because it gives peace and it gives me a natural vibes and it will give me a chance to experience life in a different way.

✓ I would say I prefer views from rural areas because they give me peace and a natural vibe, and they give me a chance to experience life in a different way.

Repeated word 'rural rural' is a mistake. Subject-verb agreement: 'views... give' (plural) rather than 'gives'. 'Natural vibes' should be 'a natural vibe' or 'natural vibes' without 'a' — choose 'a natural vibe' here. Consistent tense: use present simple 'give'. Also simplify 'I would say I would prefer' to 'I would say I prefer' for clarity.

× I would say I would prefer views from other countries because, uh, since I'm living in the, in this country, I would say like I would be able to travel anytime, but uh, if you have a chance, you would visit other countries and check out the places there.

✓ I would say I prefer views from other countries because, since I live in this country, I can travel anytime, but if you have a chance, you should visit other countries and check out the places there.

Excessive use of 'would' makes the sentence awkward; use present simple 'prefer' and 'live' for general facts. 'Would be able to travel anytime' is better as 'can travel anytime'. For advice, 'should visit' is more appropriate than 'would visit'. Remove filler words ('uh', 'like') for clarity.

× It will give you different kind of experience.

✓ It will give you a different kind of experience.

Missing article 'a' before 'different kind' and singular agreement: use 'a different kind of experience'. Also maintain pronoun consistency: 'it will give you' is acceptable, but ensure the noun phrase is correct.