视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, but it is brief and slightly formal. To improve, make the response more natural by using a conversational phrase, add one or two specific reasons or examples, and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Use a linking word to connect your reason to the statement (e.g., "because", "so", "for example").

範例: Yes, I do — I love photographing different places because it helps me remember special moments. For example, I often take pictures of local markets and rivers when I travel, since the colours and activities tell stories about each place.

建議: Your answer gives a clear preference and a reason, but the phrasing is slightly awkward and vague. Improve by using plural nouns and clearer wording (e.g., "they are connected to traditions and culture"). Add a short specific detail to make the response more vivid and use a linking phrase (e.g., "because", "for instance").

範例: I usually prefer rural views because they are more connected to local traditions and culture. For instance, I enjoy photographing old village houses and traditional festivals, which show how people live and celebrate.

建議: The meaning is understandable but the sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. To improve, give a direct, natural statement (e.g., "I prefer views in my own country") and explain why with a specific reason and example. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and use a linking word such as "because" or "so".

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the history and stories behind many places. For example, when I photograph historic sites at home, I can capture details that tourists might miss and explain their significance.

× I usually prefer rural areas because it is connected with our tradition and cultures.

✓ I usually prefer rural areas because they are connected with our traditions and culture.

Subject-verb and noun agreement: 'rural areas' is plural so the pronoun must be 'they' and the verb 'are'. Word choice and number: use plural 'traditions' for multiple customs and singular 'culture' (or 'cultures') consistently. Suggestion: match number between subject and pronoun/verb and use consistent count for related nouns. Use: 'they are' + 'traditions and culture' or 'traditions and cultures' depending on intended meaning.

× I prefer that I have viewed in my own country.

✓ I prefer the places I have visited in my own country.

'Prefer' with a relative clause: the original sentence misuses 'prefer that I have viewed'. 'Viewed' is weak here; native speakers use 'visited' for places. Structure: use 'the places I have visited' or 'to visit' depending on meaning. Suggestion: say 'I prefer the places I have visited in my own country' to express preference for views seen at home.