视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “take photos of different views,” “share with my friends and family”).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I experiment with angles to create mood, and I also record short videos so I can share memories with my friends and family when I get home.

建議: Organize your answer with a clear preference and one contrasting reason. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., “these buildings,” “at night”) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “however” to contrast preferences.

範例: I prefer rural views because I often cycle to the mountains and take photos as keepsakes. However, I also enjoy urban scenes, especially at sunset when the golden sunlight hits the buildings or at night when the city lights look beautiful.

建議: Give a direct answer first (e.g., both), then support it with one clear reason. Fix grammar and remove repetition (“the tourists the tourists”). Be specific about what makes different countries interesting (culture, landscapes) to strengthen your response.

範例: I prefer views in both my country and abroad because each place has unique attractions. For instance, foreign countries offer different cultures and architecture, while my country has familiar landscapes and hidden spots that resemble places elsewhere.

× 'I do like taking pictures at different views, I also do angles to give it more meaning or more feelings to it.'

✓ 'I do like taking pictures of different views; I also use different angles to give them more meaning or feeling.'

'taking pictures at different views' is incorrect preposition and noun form; 'pictures of views' and 'use angles' require base verb 'use' + noun, while 'give it more meaning' has wrong pronoun number. Suggest using 'of' for pictures of views, 'use different angles' and plural pronoun 'them' or singular 'a view' to match number.'

× 'I also like taking videos for the memories I to share with my friends, my family when I get back home.'

✓ 'I also like taking videos to share with my friends and family when I get back home.'

'for the memories I to share' is ungrammatical: use infinitive purpose 'to share' not 'I to'. Also 'friends, my family' repetition and punctuation; use 'friends and family'.'

× 'I'd like to photograph where I go when I'm cycling.'

✓ 'I like to photograph the places I visit when I go cycling.'

'I'd like' (would like) suggests a desire rather than habitual action; context implies habitual preference so simple present 'I like' or 'I enjoy photographing' fits better. Also 'where I go' is vague; 'the places I visit' is clearer.'

× 'We climb the mountains and take a picture of it as a memory.'

✓ 'We climb mountains and take pictures of them as mementos.'

Mix of present habitual and incorrect pronoun/number: 'mountains' plural so use 'them' not 'it'; 'take a picture' singular conflicts with plural mountains. 'As a memory' is better expressed as 'as mementos.' Maintained present habitual tense.'

× 'But I also like the urban areas when the golden sunlight touches this buildings, the city lights when at night.'

✓ 'But I also like urban areas when the golden sunlight touches the buildings, and the city lights at night.'

Errors: 'this buildings' wrong determiner and number; use 'the buildings'. 'when at night' is awkward; use 'at night.' Add conjunction 'and' for parallel ideas.'

× 'I also love that.'

✓ 'I also love those scenes.'

'That' is vague; 'those scenes' clarifies plural reference to sunlight and city lights and matches context. Present tense 'love' is fine.'

× 'Honestly, I can't really compare for other countries for my country because every country has a special places that the tourists the tourists would really like enjoy as well as I do.'

✓ 'Honestly, I can't really compare other countries with my country because every country has special places that tourists would really enjoy as much as I do.'

Several structural and word-order errors: 'compare for' should be 'compare ... with'; remove duplicate 'the tourists'; 'special places' should not have 'a'; 'would really like enjoy' is ungrammatical; use 'would really enjoy' or 'would enjoy as much as I do.' Maintains present general statement.

× 'There are also places in my country that look the same in others and vice versa.'

✓ 'There are also places in my country that look the same as places in other countries, and vice versa.'

'look the same in others' is vague; add 'as places in other countries' for clarity and proper comparison. 'vice versa' should refer back clearly.