视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak clearly and organize your reply: start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “take photos,” “scenery,” “share on social media”) and avoid unrelated or unclear words. Keep the answer natural and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Also correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and pronunciation to make meaning clear.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes and city skylines because I like capturing interesting light and colours, and then I share my best shots on social media to get feedback from friends and family.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the preference, then explain with 1–2 specific reasons and use linking words (e.g., “however,” “because,” “on the other hand”). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and natural collocations (e.g., “urban areas,” “rural countryside,” “peaceful”). Avoid repeating words and keep responses concise.

範例: It depends on my mood, but I slightly prefer rural areas because they are calmer and more peaceful. However, I also enjoy urban views for their energy and interesting architecture, especially when I want to photograph busy streets or modern buildings.

建議: Answer directly then give clear reasons with linking words. Use correct pronouns and natural phrases (e.g., “my own country,” “feel comfortable,” “familiar with the surroundings”). Provide a brief example if possible. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

範例: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I feel more comfortable and familiar with the people and surroundings. For instance, I know the best local spots and the right times for good light, so I can capture better photos.

× Zion is absolutely taking their picture open the difference you slept my hobby and I like to click the pictures on the different shoes and the capture the scenery which I watch and I saw and I like to share my picture on the social media with my friends and family.

✓ I absolutely enjoy taking pictures of different views; photography is my hobby. I like to take photos of various scenes I see and share them on social media with my friends and family.

This sentence has multiple structural and word-choice problems that fall under sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect use of articles/pronouns (IDs 22 and 12). The original is ungrammatical and contains wrong words (e.g., 'Zion', 'open', 'you slept', 'shoes') and awkward pronoun use ('their' with unclear antecedent). Correction splits the run-on into clear sentences, replaces incorrect words with appropriate ones (enjoy/taking pictures/photography/hobby/take photos/scenes), and uses correct articles and pronouns. Suggestion: write one clear idea per clause, choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'take photos' not 'click the pictures' in formal contexts), and ensure pronouns refer clearly to a noun.

× Honestly it's depends on my mood.

✓ Honestly, it depends on my mood.

The error is incorrect auxiliary/modal or subject-verb construction (ID 4 and 27). 'It's depends' incorrectly uses the contraction 'it's' + verb; the correct third-person singular subject is 'it' with verb 'depends' (no auxiliary). Suggestion: remove the contraction and use 'it depends' for present simple statements about general facts or preferences.

× Both have their own views and and values.

✓ Both have their own views and values.

This is a sentence structure/repetition error (ID 26). There is an accidental repetition of 'and'. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicate words and ensure parallel structure ('views and values').

× Mostly I like the urban areas and the countryside.

✓ Mostly, I like urban areas and the countryside.

Minor article and word order issue (ID 6 and 22). 'The urban areas' is acceptable but 'urban areas' without 'the' is more natural when speaking generally; add a comma after 'Mostly'. Suggestion: use no article for general plural nouns when speaking broadly ('urban areas').

× It's feels like the calm and the peaceful for me.

✓ It feels calm and peaceful to me.

This contains incorrect verb form and article usage (IDs 2 and 13 and 17). 'It's feels' is ungrammatical (double subject/auxiliary). 'the calm and the peaceful' misuses definite articles with adjectives. Correction uses correct subject-verb agreement ('It feels') and adjective usage. Suggestion: use adjectives without 'the' when describing feelings (calm, peaceful) and 'to me' for personal opinion.

× And sometimes I like the traffic areas.

✓ Sometimes I like busy, bustling areas with traffic.

Awkward phrasing (ID 26). 'the traffic areas' is unnatural; replace with a natural noun phrase 'busy, bustling areas with traffic'. Suggestion: choose descriptive adjectives and natural collocations ('areas with traffic', 'busy areas').

× Mostly I like to collect the picture in my country because in your own country you are the comfortable with the people's and the surrounding area and you are also familiar with your country.

✓ Mostly I like to take pictures in my country because in your own country you are comfortable with the people and the surroundings, and you are familiar with the place.

Multiple tense/word-choice and article/pronoun errors (IDs 6, 22, 12, 11). 'collect the picture' is incorrect; use 'take pictures'. 'in your own country you are the comfortable' has wrong pronoun and article; use 'you are comfortable'. 'the people's' incorrect possessive and plural noun; use 'the people' or 'people'. 'surrounding area' pluralized to 'surroundings' fits better. Suggestion: use 'take pictures', use correct pronouns ('your' consistently if addressing listener) and avoid unnecessary 'the' before adjectives like 'comfortable'.

× That's why I would like to click the pictures on the my country.

✓ That's why I would like to take pictures in my country.

This contains article and preposition errors (IDs 22 and 11) and incorrect verb choice (click → take) which is informal in some dialects. 'on the my country' is ungrammatical; use 'in my country' and remove extra article 'the'. Suggestion: use 'in' for countries and 'my country' without 'the', and use 'take pictures' for standard English.