视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms (e.g., 'taking pictures' → 'taking pictures of wheels'), articles, and word order. Make the response concise and natural: begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep under five sentences.

範例: I don't usually take pictures of landscapes; I prefer photographing food. For example, I'm the admin of a food review page on Facebook and Instagram, so I often take photos to showcase dishes. Because I enjoy cooking and trying new restaurants, I focus on composition and lighting to make the food look appetising.

建議: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary: use correct prepositions and nouns (e.g., 'prefer urban views' not 'prefer to urban area views'). Avoid unclear words like 'washing' — perhaps you meant 'watching' or 'walking'. Start with a direct answer then explain with two specific reasons linked with words like 'because' or 'as'.

範例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy watching buildings and busy streets. For example, I like seeing different architectural styles and the energy of traffic, which feels lively and interesting compared with quiet countryside scenes.

建議: Correct word choice and coherence: say 'I prefer views in other countries' and replace incorrect words ('harm') with accurate emotions ('calm' or 'charmed'). Use linking words to add a specific reason and an example. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: I prefer views in other countries, especially Japan, because I find its architecture charming and beautiful. For example, traditional wooden houses and neat streets make me feel calm and inspired when I see photos or travel there.

× No, I don't like to taking picture of wheels but I prefer to taking a photo of food because I like to eat and I am a admin of food review page in Facebook and Instagram so I have a passion to taking a photo of.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of wheels, but I prefer taking photos of food because I like to eat and I am an admin of a food review page on Facebook and Instagram, so I have a passion for taking photos.

Multiple errors: 'to taking' is incorrect because after 'like' and 'prefer' we use the base verb or gerund (like taking, prefer taking) not 'to' + gerund (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'a admin' should be 'an admin' because 'admin' begins with a vowel sound (Article errors, Grammar Problem Type 22). 'of food review page in Facebook and Instagram' needs preposition corrections: use 'a food review page on Facebook and Instagram' (Incorrect use of prepositions, Grammar Problem Type 11). 'a passion to taking a photo of' should be 'a passion for taking photos' (preposition + gerund issue). Suggestion: use gerund after like/prefer, pluralize countable nouns when general, use 'an' before vowel sounds, and use 'on' for platforms and 'passion for' + gerund.

× I prefer to urban area views because I like to washing, uh building and traffic more than natural views.

✓ I prefer urban area views because I like washing, buildings, and traffic more than natural views.

Errors: 'prefer to urban area views' should be 'prefer urban area views' (do not use 'to' before noun phrase after 'prefer') (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'to washing' is incorrect; after 'like' we use the gerund 'washing' without 'to' (Grammar Problem Type 8 and 11). 'building' should be plural 'buildings' when speaking generally (Singular and plural issue, Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: drop unnecessary 'to', use gerunds correctly, and pluralize countable nouns when general.

× I prefer a view in another country. I like view in Japan because the architecture of Japan is very cute and very beautiful, and when I watch the view in Japan, I will feel harm and happy.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. I like the views in Japan because Japanese architecture is very charming and beautiful, and when I look at the views in Japan, I feel calm and happy.

Multiple issues: 'prefer a view in another country' is odd when meaning generally—use plural 'views in other countries' (Singular and plural issue, Grammar Problem Type 1). 'I like view in Japan' needs articles and plural: 'I like the views in Japan' (Article errors, Grammar Problem Type 22). 'the architecture of Japan is very cute and very beautiful' is wordy; 'Japanese architecture is very charming and beautiful' is more natural (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, Grammar Problem Type 13). 'when I watch the view' is unnatural; use 'look at the views' or 'see the views' (Sentence structure/verb choice, Grammar Problem Type 26). 'I will feel harm and happy' is incorrect: 'harm' is a noun and doesn't fit; likely meant 'calm' or 'warm'—use 'feel calm and happy' and present tense 'I feel' for general response (Present tense issue, Grammar Problem Type 6). Suggestion: use plural forms for general preferences, include definite articles when referring to specific things, choose appropriate adjectives, use 'look at' instead of 'watch' for scenery, and use simple present to express habitual feelings.