视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with a brief reason. Avoid filler phrases and repetition. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., 'scenery', 'landscape', 'sights') and use one linking word when adding detail.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different kinds of scenery, such as rural landscapes and famous landmarks, because each place has unique colours and atmosphere. For example, I like capturing golden fields in the countryside and the architectural details of popular tourist sites.

建議: Clarify your preference with one clear statement, then contrast the two choices using a linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'but') and provide specific reasons. Correct vocabulary (prefer, not perfume) and avoid fillers like 'um' or 'you know'.

範例: I generally prefer urban views because cities have interesting landmarks and vibrant streets. However, when I want to relax I choose the countryside, since the quiet scenery and open space are much more peaceful.

建議: Make a direct, grammatically correct statement about your preference, then give a concise reason with one or two specific points. Use correct verb forms and avoid awkward phrasing ('I've never been to' rather than 'I never gone to').

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I haven't explored them yet and everything seems new and exciting. For instance, I would love to photograph coastal towns abroad that have different architecture and colours compared with places at home.

× I prefer using other countries for sure 'cause I mean, the country where I'm currently staying is the country that I've been to so many places of, and I've seen so many places of this country, but the other countries I never gone to any of.

✓ I prefer other countries for sure, because I mean the country where I'm currently staying is a country I have been to many times and I have seen many places there, but I have never been to any other countries.

Errors: incorrect verb choice 'prefer using' (should be 'prefer'), awkward phrasing 'the country that I've been to so many places of' and wrong past participle 'never gone to' without auxiliary. Also redundant 'any of'. Suggestions: Use 'prefer' + noun phrase, use present perfect 'have been to' and 'have never been to' with auxiliary 'have', simplify 'many times' or 'many places', and replace informal ''cause' with 'because' in formal responses. Ensure subject-verb constructions are complete and use correct past participle forms.

× I mean different, even though there are different places, but you can also see the beauty they have.

✓ I mean different places; even though they are different, you can still see their beauty.

Errors: awkward structure and redundancy 'I mean different, even though there are different places, but...' Use a clear subject 'places' and correct pronoun 'their' to show possession. Remove redundant conjunctions: do not use both 'even though' and 'but'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× To be honest, I perfume urban areas views, but if I'm going to go like to relax myself, I'll definitely go to the rural area.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in urban areas, but if I'm going to relax, I'll definitely go to the rural area.

Errors: 'perfume' is incorrect word choice for 'prefer'. 'Urban areas views' word order is wrong; use 'views in urban areas'. Unnecessary filler 'like' and reflexive 'relax myself' — simply 'relax' is natural. Suggestions: choose correct verb 'prefer', use correct noun phrase order, avoid filler words, and use natural verbs without unnecessary reflexive pronouns.

× Umm but you know when I go to the urban area I can see more landmarks and they are splendid.

✓ When I go to urban areas, I can see more landmarks and they are splendid.

Errors: informal filler 'Umm but you know' should be removed in a formal test answer. 'the urban area' is too definite; use plural 'urban areas' or 'the city' depending on meaning. Add comma after introductory clause. Keep concise for clarity.

× I prefer using other countries for sure 'cause I mean, the country where I'm currently staying is the country that I've been to so many places of, and I've seen so many places of this country, but the other countries I never gone to any of.

✓ I prefer other countries for sure, because the country where I'm currently staying is one I have visited many times and I have seen many places there, but I have never been to any other country.

Errors: repeated in original; main issues are incorrect past participle 'never gone to' (needs auxiliary 'have never been to'), and awkward 'been to so many places of' phrasing. Use present perfect 'have visited'/'have seen' for experiences up to now, and 'have never been to' for negative experience. Use singular 'country' after 'any other' for clarity or plural 'any other countries' with consistent verb form.