视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a short specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct collocations (e.g., 'take photos of views', 'beautiful scenery').

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially natural scenery like sunsets. For example, I often photograph the coastline at sunset because the colors and calm atmosphere make the images memorable.

建議: Provide a clear comparative sentence and then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (use 'prefer X to Y') and avoid vague phrasing like 'are coming'.

範例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside has more varied natural scenery. For instance, mountains and wide fields make me feel relaxed, and the fresh air is a nice contrast to the city's noise.

建議: Answer directly with a correct comparative structure and provide a specific supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences; mention one or two concrete examples from your country.

範例: I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because it has diverse landscapes like Ha Long Bay and terraced rice fields. For example, the rice terraces in Sapa offer unique patterns and colors that I rarely see elsewhere.

× Yes, I really like taking photos to different views.

✓ Yes, I really like taking photos of different views.

The verb phrase 'like taking' correctly uses the -ing form, but the preposition 'to' is incorrect with 'photos'. Use 'photos of' to indicate what the photos depict. Suggestion: use 'photos of' or 'pictures of' to describe subjects of photographs.

× I especially enjoy the beautiful sceneries such as sunsets.

✓ I especially enjoy beautiful scenery, such as sunsets.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. Also 'the beautiful scenery' or simply 'beautiful scenery' is natural. Suggestion: use uncountable noun 'scenery' and include an example with 'such as'.

× Uh, natural, peaceful, natural scene because they look great and remind me.

✓ I like natural, peaceful scenes because they look great and are evocative.

The original is fragmented and repeats 'natural'. 'Scenes' must agree with 'they'. 'Remind me' is incomplete without an object; use 'are evocative' or 'remind me of home' with an object. Suggestion: form a complete clause with subject and verb and avoid repetition.

× I prefer rural areas than urban areas because the countryside has some beautiful scenery.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because the countryside has beautiful scenery.

The correct comparative preposition is 'prefer ... to ...', not 'prefer ... than ...'. Also 'some' is unnecessary with uncountable 'scenery'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and drop 'some' or use 'some beautiful landscapes' if plural.

× Mountains and natural landscape are coming and make me feel beautiful, relaxed in fresh air.

✓ Mountains and natural landscapes are calming and make me feel relaxed in the fresh air.

'Are coming' is incorrect here; use an adjective like 'calming'. 'Natural landscape' should be plural to match 'mountains' or rephrase. 'Make me feel beautiful' is odd—use 'make me feel relaxed'. Include 'the' before 'fresh air' for naturalness. Suggestion: use adjectives (calming) and correct noun forms and articles.

× I prefer in my countries than in other countries because in Vietnam there is some beautiful landscape, beautiful scenery and.

✓ I prefer places in my country to those in other countries because Vietnam has beautiful landscapes and scenery.

Multiple issues: 'prefer in my countries' is wrong—use 'prefer places in my country to those in other countries'. Use singular 'country' for speaker's nation. Use 'to' not 'than' with 'prefer'. 'There is some' is awkward with plural 'landscapes'; use 'Vietnam has beautiful landscapes and scenery'. Also original sentence trails off; provide a complete thought. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B', correct number agreement, and complete the sentence.