视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, avoid repetition and grammar errors, and include a clear topic sentence with one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and vary vocabulary (e.g., "scenery", "landscape"). Aim for 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase for the example.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and coastal scenery to remember the colours and light.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (subject–verb agreement), remove fillers, and provide two specific reasons linked logically. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to make it coherent.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and the air is fresher. For example, I enjoy sitting on a hill and photographing wide fields and distant mountains at sunrise.

建議: Start with a direct answer, eliminate hesitation sounds, and give 1–2 specific reasons or an example. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "explore", "discover", "scenery") and a linking word such as "because" to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural scenery to discover. For example, I enjoyed photographing terraced fields in a foreign countryside, which felt fresh and inspiring.

× I think everybody likes taking picture of a different view.

✓ I think everybody likes taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'everybody likes taking pictures' refers to the general activity of taking more than one picture. Also 'a different view' is inconsistent with 'everybody' and the general idea; use plural 'different views'. Use plural nouns after verbs describing general habits.

× For example, when I went to the trip, I like to taking photos of different scenic sceneries and landscapes and I like like.

✓ For example, when I went on the trip, I liked taking photos of different sceneries and landscapes.

Several issues: the correct preposition is 'went on the trip' not 'went to the trip' (preposition error but main tense error is 'I like to taking' — mixing present and continuous with past context). Because the sentence begins with 'when I went on the trip' (past), the main verb should be past tense 'I liked'. 'taking' should follow 'liked' as a gerund: 'liked taking photos'. 'scenery' is uncountable, so use 'sceneries' only if emphasizing different types or simply 'scenery and landscapes' is acceptable; here 'sceneries' is okay when modified by 'different'. The repeated 'and I like like' is ungrammatical and redundant, so remove it.

× Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas? Student: I prefer views in rural areas. Uh, I think, uh, uh, views in rural areas is more, umm, beautiful than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas. I think views in rural areas are more beautiful than those in urban areas.

There are two problems: subject-verb agreement ('views ... is' should be 'views ... are') and comparison reference. Use plural verb 'are' with plural subject 'views'. When comparing, use 'those' to refer back to 'views' in urban areas: 'than those in urban areas'. Also remove filler words.

× The weather is uh, fresher and uh, I like to, uh, sit down on the hill and umm, uh, take some photos of and see.

✓ The weather is fresher, and I like to sit on a hill and take some photos of the scenery.

'Fresher' is fine but remove fillers. 'sit down on the hill' is awkward; use 'sit on a hill'. 'take some photos of and see' is incomplete; specify 'take some photos of the scenery' or 'and enjoy the view'. Also 'sit' does not need 'down' here. This corrects sentence structure and completes the object of 'take photos of'.

× Uh, I prefer views in other countries because, uh, all the views are new to me and uh, I like to, uh, explore, uh, in a new, uh, countryside and umm, soak up the new views.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because all the views are new to me, and I like to explore new countryside and soak up the new scenery.

Maintain present tense 'prefer' and 'like to explore' — these are correct but were interrupted by fillers. 'explore in a new countryside' is unidiomatic; use 'explore new countryside' or 'explore a new countryside' depending on meaning. 'soak up the new views' is okay but 'scenery' sounds more natural. Remove fillers and streamline for clarity.

× I like to taking photos of different scenic sceneries and landscapes and I like like.

✓ I like taking photos of different sceneries and landscapes.

After 'like', use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. 'like to taking' mixes forms; correct forms are 'like to take photos' or 'like taking photos'. Also remove the duplicated 'like like'.