视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce repetition and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Watch articles and verb forms (e.g., “the the”, “does not look”, “many dimensions” unclear).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views because variety makes images more interesting. For example, I often shoot a landscape from both ground level and a higher vantage point, which reveals different light and textures; this gives a more complete impression of the place.

建議: Clarify your preference and give logical, accurate reasons. Avoid contradictions (your answer claims urban areas are 'clear of population', then mentions nature protected there). Use linking words (because, for example, however) and correct articles and plural forms.

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because cities often have well-maintained parks and riverside promenades. For example, the city parks near my home have planted trees, walking paths and wildlife habitats that are protected and easy to access.

建議: Be careful with comparisons and grammar. State your preference directly, then give a specific reason with clear comparison language (e.g., 'more dramatic mountains'). Avoid vague phrases like 'cannot be converted' and subjective negative judgments about your country. Use correct verb agreement and plural/singular forms.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because places like Switzerland have dramatic alpine scenery that my country lacks. For instance, the high mountains and clear glacial lakes in Switzerland offer landscapes I rarely see at home, so I enjoy visiting them to photograph different types of nature.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because having the the picture from the same angle does not looks fascinating as it is from many different views and I like variety.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views because having the same picture from the same angle does not look as fascinating as one taken from many different views, and I like variety.

Errors: repeated word 'the the' (article/typo) and wrong verb form 'does not looks' (subject-verb agreement/present tense). Relevant grammar types: 22 (Article errors) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors). Explanation: Remove the duplicated article 'the' and use 'does not look' or simply 'doesn't look' because after 'does' the base form 'look' must be used. Also improved clarity by changing 'it is from many different views' to 'one taken from many different views'. Suggestion: Proofread to remove duplicated words and ensure verbs after 'do/does' are in base form; keep sentence concise.

× Umm, I prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas the cities are clear of of the population and everything there is being protected like nature, trees and the grass and and animals.

✓ Umm, I prefer views in urban areas because cities there are less crowded and nature, trees, grass, and animals are protected.

Errors: repeated words 'of of' and 'and and' (typos), awkward phrase 'the cities are clear of the population' and unnecessary article 'the' before 'grass'. Relevant grammar types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 22 (Article errors), and general sentence structure (26). Explanation: 'clear of the population' is unnatural; 'less crowded' or 'have fewer people' is clearer. Use plural noun lists without unnecessary 'the' and remove duplicated words. Suggestion: Eliminate repetitions, use natural collocations (e.g., 'less crowded', 'protected'), and simplify the sentence structure.

× Even though views in my country might be looking good, views in other countries like Switzerland and and Pakistan which has very umm good nature cannot be converted in my country.

✓ Even though views in my country might look good, views in other countries like Switzerland and Pakistan, which have very beautiful natural scenery, cannot be found in my country.

Errors: repeated word 'and and' (typo), incorrect verb form 'might be looking' (awkward progressive where simple 'might look' is better), relative clause agreement 'which has' should be 'which have' since it refers to plural 'countries', wrong verb 'cannot be converted in my country' (wrong meaning). Relevant grammar types: 6 (Present tense issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), and 26 (Sentence structure errors). Explanation: Use simple present/modal 'might look' for opinions; ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses ('countries... have'). Replace 'converted in my country' with 'found in my country' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: Use concise verb forms for opinions, match verb number to subject, and choose correct verbs for meaning.

× To be honest my country is considered less to countries like Switzerland.

✓ To be honest, my country is considered less developed compared to countries like Switzerland.

Errors: incomplete/incorrect comparative 'considered less to' is ungrammatical and lacks the thing being compared. Relevant grammar types: 25 (Comparative and superlative errors) and 22 (Article errors)/26 (Sentence structure errors). Explanation: You must specify what 'less' refers to (e.g., 'less developed') and use 'compared to' or 'than' for comparisons. Also add a comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: State the quality being compared and use correct comparative constructions such as 'less X than' or 'less X compared to'.