视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two brief reasons with specific detail. Avoid filler words (e.g., "somehow", "will be") and grammar mistakes (use present simple). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially of frontal views. I prefer front views because they often capture faces or main subjects clearly and create a strong first impression. For example, I like photographing people and buildings head-on to show symmetry and detail.

建議: Give a clear preference or explain you have no strict preference, then support your answer with specific reasons and examples. Remove hesitations and repeated words. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I don't have a strict preference between urban and rural views because I choose scenes based on aesthetics. For instance, in cities I enjoy photographing vibrant street life, while in the countryside I like wide landscapes and natural light, so it depends on the mood I'm trying to capture.

建議: Be clearer and more polite when comparing countries. State your preference and give concrete reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases like "a little bit dry"; instead describe what you mean (less variety, fewer landmarks). Use one linking word such as "because" to connect reason to preference.

範例: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they often offer new scenery and cultural landmarks I haven't seen before. For example, when I traveled to Italy I photographed colorful streets and historic architecture that were very different from the more uniform landscapes at home.

× I just just uh, taking whatever I like it.

✓ I just, uh, take whatever I like.

The sentence uses 'taking' where a simple present verb 'take' is required to match the habitual meaning. Also 'I like it' is redundant after 'whatever'; remove 'it'. Use commas to show hesitation. Suggestion: use the base verb for habitual actions ('I take').

× Somehow the picture that I will be taking is front views because the front view is so good to take.

✓ I usually take photos of front views because the front view is the easiest to photograph.

Pronoun and noun usage is awkward: 'the picture that I will be taking' is unnatural and 'front views' plural mismatches. Use 'I usually take photos of front views' for habitual action. 'So good to take' should be expressed as 'easy to photograph' or 'pleasant to photograph'. Also change future 'will be taking' to present habitual 'take'.

× I prefer the other country for taking this because there's a lot of people that did not see the other country's views.

✓ I prefer other countries for taking these photos because many people have not seen the views there.

Preposition and determiner issues: 'the other country' is too specific; use 'other countries'. 'For taking this' is awkward; use 'for taking these photos'. 'There's a lot of people' is informal and mismatches verb; use 'many people have not seen' and replace 'the other country's views' with 'the views there'. Also change past simple 'did not see' to present perfect 'have not seen' to indicate life experience.

× My country just a little bit dry.

✓ My country is just a bit dry.

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' and awkward modifier 'a little bit dry'. Use 'is' for state description and 'a bit' or 'a little' as adverbial modifier: 'is just a bit dry'. This corrects sentence structure and adjective use.

× So yeah, if I feel it aesthetic, I'll take it.

✓ So yeah, if I find it aesthetic, I'll take it.

Use of 'feel it aesthetic' is unidiomatic; 'find it aesthetic' or 'think it's aesthetically pleasing' is correct. 'If' clause refers to future action so present simple 'find' with future 'I'll take' is appropriate.