视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid tense and article errors, and finish your example. Use one or two linking words to add a brief specific detail (what you photograph, when, or why). Keep answers under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing beautiful scenery and vivid colors. For example, when I was eight I used to visit national parks with my family and I often photographed waterfalls and sunsets to remember those trips.

建議: Give a direct preference or say you like both for different reasons. Use clear, simple sentences and correct word choices (e.g., "prefer," "buildings," "streets"). Add linking words (however, whereas) to compare urban and rural views and complete your descriptions with specific details about what appeals to you in each setting.

範例: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban areas feel exciting because of tall buildings, busy streets and colorful lights; whereas rural areas are peaceful, with green fields and quiet paths where I can relax and take landscape photos.

建議: This answer is incomplete and unclear. Begin with a clear opinion (I prefer, I don't mind, or It depends). Use simple, correct grammar and give one or two specific reasons or an example (culture, architecture, nature). Avoid filler words and finish your sentence.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different architecture and cultural landscapes that I can't find at home. For example, I loved the narrow historic streets and colorful markets when I visited Spain last year.

× So yes, of course I'm really enjoy photographing in different places because I love capturing beautiful scenery and vivid colors.

✓ So yes, of course I really enjoy photographing in different places because I love capturing beautiful scenery and vivid colors.

The error is using 'I'm really enjoy' which mixes present continuous 'I'm' with the base verb 'enjoy'. Use simple present 'I really enjoy' to express a habitual preference. Suggestion: use 'I really enjoy' for likes/habits.

× For example, when I was 8 I often travel with my family to National Park and I always.

✓ For example, when I was eight I often traveled with my family to the national park and I always did.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions ('when I was 8'), so verbs must be in the past tense. 'Travel' should be 'traveled' and 'National Park' needs the article 'the' and lowercase 'national park' unless it's a name. The fragment 'and I always' is incomplete; adding 'did' completes the idea. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense and finish incomplete clauses.

× I enjoy will boast of urban and rural areas for different reasons.

✓ I enjoy both urban and rural areas for different reasons.

'Will boast of' is incorrect here; likely intended 'both'. Use the quantifier 'both' to refer to two categories. Also 'enjoy both urban and rural areas' is natural. Suggestion: replace incorrect phrase with 'both'.

× When I was 8, my family and I traveled to an urban area and I was amazed by the tall building and lively St. would feel exciting and dramatic but also I love the peaceful green landscape and the.

✓ When I was eight, my family and I traveled to an urban area and I was amazed by the tall buildings and lively streets; it felt exciting and dramatic, but I also love the peaceful green landscapes.

Multiple errors: past events need past tense ('traveled', 'was amazed', 'felt'). 'Building' should be plural 'buildings' to match context; 'St.' likely intended 'streets'. Sentence was fragmented and mixed tenses ('would feel' incorrect here). Also 'love' expresses a general present preference—'I also love' is acceptable, but smoother to keep contrast. Suggestion: use past tense for past experiences, pluralize nouns where needed, and complete fragments.

× So in my opinion, many countries are have a. Different these prices in my country, uh, I like the.

✓ So in my opinion, many countries have different prices; in my country, I like the ...

The phrase 'are have' is a verb error—two verbs together; use 'have' to indicate possession. The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Different these prices' is incorrect word order; place 'different' before the noun 'prices'. Suggestion: use 'many countries have different prices' and complete the thought to avoid fragments.