视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms, articles, and word order. Keep answers concise (1–3 clear sentences). Add a clear topic sentence followed by one specific detail using a linking word. For example, say you enjoy landscape photography and mention a specific location or reason.

範例: Yes, I enjoy landscape photography. When I have free time, I like taking photos of mountains and natural scenery because I find them peaceful and they offer interesting textures and light.

建議: Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting reason. Correct grammar (use 'I don't have much', 'I am interested', 'rural areas'). Use a linking word like 'because' once and provide a concrete reason or example.

範例: I prefer rural views. Because rural areas are quieter and less crowded, I can take wide landscape shots and experiment with composition without distractions.

建議: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary: say 'I prefer' or 'I like both, but...' then give one clear reason. Replace vague phrases like 'historical skills' with 'historical sites' and avoid filler words. Provide a linking word to clarify choice.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many natural landscapes and interesting historical sites, so I can capture both nature and cultural architecture in my photos.

× Yes, I interested in photography if when I have lot of free times, I feel for to take photos in mountains, hills and natural scenery.

✓ Yes, I am interested in photography. When I have a lot of free time, I like to take photos of mountains, hills, and natural scenery.

Errors: missing auxiliary verb for present continuous/state (should be 'am interested'); incorrect conditional phrasing ('if when'); noun number and article errors ('a lot of free time' not 'lot of free times'); awkward verb choice and structure ('I feel for to take' incorrect; use 'I like to take' or 'I enjoy taking'); wrong preposition and object ('take photos of' not 'take photos in' for scenery). Suggestion: Use 'am interested' for stative verbs, 'When I have' for time clauses, 'a lot of free time' for uncountable noun, and 'like to take photos of' for standard collocation.

× I have not many knowledge in photography, but I interested.

✓ I do not have much knowledge of photography, but I am interested.

Errors: 'not many knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is uncountable and requires 'much' and negative uses 'do not have'; missing auxiliary 'am' for 'interested'; preposition should be 'knowledge of' not 'in'. Suggestion: Use 'I do not have much knowledge of X' and 'I am interested' for stative adjectives.

× I usually feel for views on rural area because because of it is too easy and and convenient for.

✓ I usually prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and convenient.

Errors: 'feel for' is incorrect collocation; use 'prefer' or 'like'; 'on rural area' should be 'in rural areas' (preposition and plural); repeated 'because'; 'because of it is' ungrammatical — use 'because they are'; 'too easy and convenient for' is vague and ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb agreement ('they are') and correct prepositions: 'prefer views in rural areas' and supply clear reasons like 'more peaceful and convenient'.

× Uh, I feel for too. Visit my own country because it is great source of natural views and historical skills.

✓ I feel the same. I visit my own country because it is a great source of natural scenery and historical sites.

Errors: 'feel for too' is incorrect — use 'feel the same' or 'I do too'; sentence fragment 'Visit my own country' needs subject 'I' and appropriate tense; 'great source of natural views' better as 'natural scenery'; 'historical skills' is wrong word — should be 'historical sites' or 'historical landmarks'; missing article 'a' before 'great source'. Suggestion: Use complete sentences with subjects and choose correct nouns ('scenery', 'sites') to convey meaning.