音乐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然并包含主旨句和具体原因。可在主句后用连接词补充具体细节，避免重复表达“happy”。比如说明喜欢快乐音乐的具体效果（提神、放松、增强心情），并提供一个简短例子。注意句子不要太冗长，控制在五句以内。

範例: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me relax after a long day. For example, upbeat pop songs with lively melodies usually make me feel more energetic and optimistic.

建議: 回答要更准确和连贯。先直接回答，然后用连接词（for example, because, so）说明原因，并用具体细节描述音乐节奏、节拍或舞蹈如何影响情绪。注意语法（e.g., “the dance can make people”）。避免模糊词语，尽量提供一到两个具体例子。

範例: Yes, it does, because upbeat rhythms and strong beats naturally increase my energy. For example, fast-tempo dance tracks with a driving bass line make me want to move and feel more excited.

× I prefer happy music because when I listen to happy music, I can also be very happy.

✓ I prefer happy music because when I listen to happy music, I can also feel very happy.

句子中原文用的是“be very happy”，雖然語法不完全錯誤，但在這裡更自然的動詞是“feel”，表示“感到快樂”。根據第8類（動詞 + -ing）與第13類（形容詞/副詞使用）範疇，應注意動詞搭配，使表達更地道。建議用“feel”來描述感覺："feel happy"。

× Yes, happy music will also have upbeats and the dance can makes people feel really excited.

✓ Yes, happy music will also have upbeats and the dance can make people feel really excited.

原句中“can makes”主語是“can”後面應接動詞原形，正確形式為“can make”。這屬於第27類主謂一致/助動詞後動詞形式錯誤。需記住情態動詞（can, will, may等）後面跟動詞原形，不能加 -s 或時態變化。建議練習情態動詞用法，如"can make"、"will make"。