自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not respond to the question. You misunderstood key words and used incorrect grammar. To improve: (1) Listen carefully to the question and identify keywords (here: “have a bike” and “when you were a child”). (2) Start with a direct topic sentence answering yes/no. (3) Add one or two specific supporting details (who you rode with, how often, or a memory). (4) Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use simple correct grammar. Practice by repeating the question and paraphrasing it before answering.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. I especially remember learning to ride with my older brother, which was a lot of fun.

建議: Your answer does not address the question and contains grammar and clarity problems. To improve: (1) Begin with a clear opinion sentence (e.g., “Yes, I think bikes are popular” or “No, they are not very popular”). (2) Give one or two specific reasons or examples to support your opinion (e.g., infrastructure, weather, commuting habits). (3) Use linking words like “because” or “however” to make the response coherent. (4) Keep sentences short and grammatically correct. Practice forming short opinion statements and backing them up with reasons.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in my city there are bike lanes and several bike-sharing services, so lots of commuters choose cycling instead of driving.

× Do you have a vibe when you have a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student misused pronouns and words: 'Do' present tense and 'have' incorrect for asking about past; 'vibe' is wrong word instead of 'bike'; 'when you have a child' refers to someone currently having a child rather than childhood. Correction uses past tense auxiliary 'Did' and past 'were' to match the examiner's question and replaces 'vibe' with 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'Did' + subject + base verb for past simple questions and choose correct noun (bike) and time expression ('when you were a child').

× Do seem bad. I'm Abdullah new country.

✓ They seem less common. I'm Abdullah, and I'm new to this country.

The student produced fragmented and unclear sentences. 'Do seem bad' lacks a subject and proper verb form; likely intended to comment on popularity of bikes. The corrected sentence supplies a subject 'They' referring to bikes and correct comparative 'less common' to express rarity. The second part lacked articles and prepositions: 'I'm Abdullah new country' should include a comma, conjunction, and 'new to this country'. Suggestion: include subject in sentences, connect ideas with conjunctions, and use 'new to' + place to indicate recent arrival.