自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cấu trúc câu và thì sai; câu trả lời không rõ ràng và thiếu chi tiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ, dùng động từ đúng (had) và cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn (ví dụ: màu sắc, ai cho bạn, bạn dùng nó để làm gì). Dùng liên từ nếu cần để nối ý.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to the park near my house.

建議: Lặp từ và phát âm/đánh máy 'properly' thay cho 'popular' gây nhầm lẫn. Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu quan điểm rõ ràng và cung cấp 1–2 lý do cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, so, therefore).

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes for daily travel, as they are faster and more convenient in heavy traffic.

× Yes, I have a bike when I go to.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' and an incomplete clause 'when I go to' while the question refers to the past ('when you were a child'). This is a tense error (present vs past) and a sentence structure error because 'when I go to' is incomplete. Use past simple 'had' to match the time frame and a complete clause 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use 'had' for past possession and state the time reference clearly: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× I think I think by bike, bikes are not properly in my country. Motorbikes are properly in my country.

✓ I think riding bicycles is not common in my country. Motorbikes are common in my country.

The original contains repetition ('I think I think'), incorrect phrase 'by bike', and incorrect use of 'properly' instead of 'common' or 'popular'. These are sentence structure and word choice errors. The verb phrase should be 'riding bicycles' or 'using bicycles'. 'Properly' is an adverb meaning correctly, not 'common'; use 'common' or 'popular' as adjectives. Suggestion: Remove repetition, use a noun/gerund for the activity ('riding bicycles'), and choose the adjective 'common' to describe how widespread something is: 'I think riding bicycles is not common in my country. Motorbikes are common in my country.'