自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Expand your answer with a brief topic sentence and one or two supporting details (where, what kind of bike, how often you rode it). Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use a linking word if you add more than one detail.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that I used when I was about six. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, and it helped me become more confident on the road.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "they are popular among the young generation"), avoid redundancy, and keep to maximum five sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, especially among young people. For example, many students use bicycles to commute to school because they are cheap and convenient; however, older adults often prefer electric scooters or cars for comfort and speed.

× Yeah, to be specific, there are popular among the young generation, but the adults and the old citizens tend to not use bikes rather than electric vehicles, so they are popular among certain people.

✓ Yeah, to be specific, they are popular among the young generation, but adults and older people tend to prefer electric vehicles to bikes, so bikes are popular only among certain groups.

The original sentence misused the pronoun 'there' where the subject pronoun 'they' is required to refer back to 'bikes' (incorrect use of pronouns). It also used awkward and incorrect comparative phrasing 'tend to not use bikes rather than electric vehicles'; the clearer structure is 'tend to prefer electric vehicles to bikes.' 'The old citizens' is unnatural in English; use 'older people' or 'older adults.' Suggestions: use the correct pronoun 'they' to refer to plural subjects, replace 'there are' with 'they are' when describing a characteristic of an existing plural noun, and use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons of choices.