自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by making the topic sentence more natural, avoiding minor grammatical issues, and adding one specific supporting detail with a linking word. For example, say the type of riding you enjoyed or a memorable moment. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did — I had a bright pink bike when I was a child. I loved riding it up and down my street with my friends, especially on warm summer evenings. For instance, we once raced to the park and challenged each other to small obstacle courses, which made those rides really memorable.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has tense and phrasing problems and is slightly wordy. Improve by using the present tense where appropriate, simplify phrasing, and add a specific reason or an example with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Bikes used to be more popular in my country, but they are less common now because more families own cars. For example, children today often travel by car to school instead of riding bicycles along the lanes.

× It was a bright pink color bike and I enjoyed riding it across my lane with my friends.

✓ It was a bright pink bike and I enjoyed riding it along my lane with my friends.

The phrase 'bright pink color bike' is redundant and ungrammatical: use 'bright pink bike' (adjective before noun). Also 'across my lane' is awkward; 'along my lane' or 'around my lane' better expresses riding within the lane. Suggestion: place adjectives in the correct order and choose the proper preposition for motion along a path. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Bikes were popular in my country, but now as the use of automobiles and vehicles have increased, it is rarely seen across that children are using bikes in the lanes.

✓ Bikes were popular in my country, but now, as the use of automobiles and vehicles has increased, children are rarely seen riding bikes in the lanes.

There are several tense and agreement problems. 'have increased' should agree with singular collective 'use' so use 'has increased' (subject-verb agreement within present perfect). The phrase 'it is rarely seen across that children are using bikes in the lanes' is ungrammatical and awkward. Better: 'children are rarely seen riding bikes in the lanes.' This corrects verb form and natural English word order. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with collective nouns and use natural constructions like 'be seen doing' for observed actions. Grammar problem type ID: 27