自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant with good description, but it is slightly repetitive and some sentences are ungrammatical or awkward (“a bike that you can use to go on mountains” and “other type of sports activity”). To improve, shorten redundant phrasing, fix grammar, and add one specific supporting detail (e.g., how often you rode it or a memorable moment). Use linking words such as “for example” or “because” to make the response more coherent. Keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a beautiful red mountain bike that I used almost every weekend to ride on local trails. For example, I remember learning to balance on a steep path with my father’s help, which made me more confident riding off-road.

建議: Your answer addresses the question and gives a good example (Giro d'Italia), but it contains repetition and minor grammar mistakes (“involve involves”, “from all of the world, from all over the world”). To improve, make one clear opinion sentence, then add a specific reason or statistic and a concise example. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Italy because many people commute by bicycle and cycling has a strong sporting culture. For example, the Giro d'Italia attracts riders and fans from around the world, which helps promote cycling at both amateur and professional levels.

× So a bike that you can use to go on mountains or you can do other type of sports activity.

✓ A bike that you can use to go mountain biking or to do other types of sports activities.

The original sentence misuses 'go on mountains' and 'do other type of sports activity'. Use the gerund form 'mountain biking' after 'go' for this activity, and parallel infinitives 'to go... or to do...' improve structure. Also 'type' should be pluralized to 'types' and 'activity' to 'activities' to match plural 'other types'. Suggestion: Use 'go mountain biking' and keep parallel structure with 'to' before both verbs, and match noun number.

× It was a beautiful red bike.

✓ It was a beautiful, red bike.

Although not strictly grammatical, listing multiple adjectives describing a noun typically requires a comma between coordinate adjectives ('beautiful' and 'red'). Adding a comma clarifies that both adjectives independently modify 'bike'. Suggestion: Use a comma between coordinate adjectives or reorder if one adjective modifies the other.

× There are so many sports that involve involves bike and an example is the Giro d'Italia that is an important bike competition from all of the world, from all over the world.

✓ There are so many sports that involve bikes, for example the Giro d'Italia, which is an important bicycle competition in the world.

The sentence has multiple issues: duplicated verb 'involve involves' (remove duplicate), subject-verb agreement with 'bikes' (plural) matches 'sports that involve bikes'. 'Bike' as a noun in formal contexts is better expressed as 'bicycle'. Use 'which' to introduce the relative clause and 'in the world' instead of redundant 'from all of the world, from all over the world'. Also use a comma and restructure for clarity. Suggestion: Eliminate duplicate words, use plural nouns to match subjects, and simplify redundant phrases.

× I live in Italy and I think that bikes are so popular in my country.

✓ I live in Italy, and I think that bicycles are very popular in my country.

'So popular' is informal and can be replaced with 'very popular' for correctness and register. Also 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is more formal. Added a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity. No major preposition error, but improved phrasing and punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'very' for emphasis in formal speech and include a comma before 'and' connecting independent clauses.

× More precisely, it was a mountain bike.

✓ More precisely, it was a mountain bike.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the past-tense context. No change necessary. Included here to indicate it meets the criteria and requires no correction.