自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but it is too short and lacks supporting details. To improve, give a brief topic sentence and add one or two specific details (e.g., what type of bike, who gave it to you, how often you used it). Use a linking word if you add more than one detail. Keep total length under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. It was a red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my sixth birthday, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar and clarity issues and repeats ideas. Improve by using correct tense, fixing plural nouns, and combining related points with linking words. Provide a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details (for example: who uses bikes, where, and why). Avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

範例: Yes, bikes have become more popular recently, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic. During that time many people started cycling for exercise and short trips because public transport was less convenient, so you could see more bicycles parked on the streets and in front of homes.

× Yes, there are a lot of basic bicycle at their home in the street lately, especially when COVID comes.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of basic bicycles in the streets and at people’s homes lately, especially during COVID-19.

The original sentence has several number and word-choice problems. 'a lot of' requires a plural noun here, so 'bicycle' should be 'bicycles' (singular/plural issue). Also 'at their home in the street' is unclear and inconsistent; changed to 'in the streets and at people’s homes' to express locations. 'lately' with a general recent period is acceptable but 'when COVID comes' is tense/usage wrong; replaced with 'during COVID-19' to correctly indicate the pandemic period. Suggestion: match quantifier with plural nouns and use clear location phrases.

× When COVID came, everybody used bicycle as their sport and exercises.

✓ When COVID-19 came, everybody used bicycles for sport and exercise.

This sentence mixes plural and uncountable noun forms and has wrong preposition/word form choices. 'used bicycle' should be 'used bicycles' (singular/plural) and 'as their sport and exercises' is incorrect: use 'for sport and exercise' to describe purpose (preposition and noun form). The tense 'When COVID came' is acceptable to refer to the past arrival of the pandemic, so keep past tense 'came'. Suggestion: use plural 'bicycles' and the correct preposition 'for' with uncountable 'exercise'.