自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response grammatically correct, concise, and add a brief reason or detail. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, use appropriate tense consistency, and include one linked supporting detail. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "riding bike" -> "riding my bike").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it. However, as I grew older I became less interested in cycling because I became busier with school and other activities.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Include a concrete example or brief comparison to strengthen your answer.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. This is mainly because many areas are rural and public transport is limited, so people often use bicycles for short trips and farm work.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a kid and I love riding bike, but as I grew older I no longer interested in biking.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid, and I loved riding it, but as I grew older I was no longer interested in biking.

Tense inconsistency and missing auxiliary: The sentence mixes present tense ('do have', 'love') with past-time reference ('when I was a kid', 'as I grew older'). Use past tense to describe past situations: 'had' and 'loved'. Also 'no longer interested' requires the auxiliary 'was' to form the correct adjective complement ('was no longer interested'). Additionally, use the object pronoun 'it' after 'riding' ('riding it') because 'bike' is countable and needs an article or pronoun. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when describing past experiences and include necessary auxiliary verbs and pronouns.

× In my opinion, yes. It is very popular in my country, especially because my country is located in a rural area where people barely used car and car and buses so they use bike.

✓ In my opinion, yes. Bicycles are very popular in my country, especially because many parts of the country are rural and people rarely use cars and buses, so they use bikes.

Article and count noun errors plus verb tense and word choice: 'It is very popular' is vague; refer to 'bicycles' (plural) to match 'are popular'. 'Located in a rural area' implies a single area; better to say 'many parts of the country are rural' or 'large rural areas'. 'People barely used car and car and buses' contains repetition and incorrect singular nouns without articles; use plural nouns 'cars and buses' and present tense 'rarely use' to state a general fact. Also use 'bikes' (plural) or 'bicycles' at the end. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general facts, correct verb tense for general truths (simple present), avoid repetition, and use appropriate articles when referring to singular countable nouns.

× I love riding bike

✓ I loved riding it

Form and article/pronoun: 'riding bike' is awkward; in English we say 'riding a bike' or use a pronoun 'riding it'. Also the context is past, so change 'love' to 'loved'. Suggestion: use 'riding a bike' or 'riding it' and match tense to context.