自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak in past tense consistently, reduce fillers (uh), and make sentences concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, or therefore). Keep answers under five sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. At that time, very few children in my neighborhood owned bicycles, so my parents didn't buy one for me. As a result, I usually walked to school or shared rides with friends.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use appropriate grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and linking words (for example, because, for short trips, therefore). Keep language natural and avoid vague phrases like "something" or filler words.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use motorcycles or bicycles to go to local shops or commute to work, so they save time and money compared with using a car.

× Uh, no, I don't have bike when I was child, uh, because, uh, at that time no one has bike or no child of my age has bike.

✓ Uh, no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, because at that time no one had a bike and no child my age had one.

The sentence mixes present tense with past time reference. 'I don't have' and 'has' are present-tense forms but the context is past ('when I was a child', 'at that time'), so past tense is required. Also include articles ('a bike') and simplify repetition. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations (didn't have, had).

× That's why I also never uh, ask for my parents to buy bike for me.

✓ That's why I also never asked my parents to buy a bike for me.

The verb 'ask' should be in past simple 'asked' because the action refers to the past. Also use 'my parents' without 'for' after 'asked' and include the article 'a bike'. Suggestion: use past simple for past events and correct verb patterns: 'ask someone to do something' -> 'asked my parents to buy a bike'.

× Bikes are popular in my country because everyone need bike to uh, for their short works or something bring from near shops and so many things are done with bikes.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because everyone needs a bike for short trips or to bring things from nearby shops, and many things are done using bikes.

Mix of plural/singular and tense: 'everyone' takes third-person singular verb 'needs'. Include article 'a bike'. 'short works' is incorrect collocation; use 'short trips'. 'from near shops' should be 'from nearby shops'. 'so many things are done with bikes' is awkward; 'many things are done using bikes' is clearer. Suggestion: match verbs with subjects, use correct collocations and articles, and simplify phrasing.