自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if adding detail and avoid redundancy. For example, correct tense, remove irrelevant words like “college school,” and say how often or why you used it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to get to school because it was faster than walking and saved money on transport.

建議: Give a clear opinion, use correct grammar and clearer reasons with specific details. Begin with a direct statement about popularity, then support it with one or two concrete reasons and a linking word (for example, because or so). Avoid absolute claims like “every single person.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people prefer them for short trips. For instance, they are cheaper to buy and maintain than cars, and they help avoid traffic in busy cities.

× Yeah, I do have a bike when I was a kid, so I usually went to my college school through a bike.

✓ I had a bike when I was a kid, so I usually went to school by bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tense ('do have' with 'was' and 'went'). Use simple past 'had' to match 'when I was a kid.' Also 'college school' is redundant and awkward; use 'school.' Use the preposition 'by' with modes of transport ('by bike'). Remove unnecessary articles ('a bike' is fine in first clause; 'by bike' requires no article). Suggestion: keep all verbs in the past when describing past habits: 'I had... I usually went...'.

× Yes I feel bikes are very normal in my country because every single person have a their personal bike instead of the car so it's a cheaper than as all the car.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very common in my country because almost everyone has their own bike instead of a car, so they are cheaper than cars.

Multiple errors: 'every single person have' is subject-verb agreement; use 'has' with singular 'every single person' or rephrase to 'almost everyone has.' 'a their personal bike' is wrong: use 'their own bike' or 'a personal bike.' 'instead of the car' should be 'instead of a car' or 'instead of cars.' Comparative phrase 'it's a cheaper than as all the car' is incorrect: compare plural nouns 'they are cheaper than cars.' Also 'feel' is acceptable but 'think' is more natural here. Suggestions: use correct subject-verb agreement, correct possessive form, correct prepositions ('instead of'), and proper comparative structure.