自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban tidak relevan terhadap pertanyaan dan tidak membentuk kalimat yang jelas dalam bahasa Inggris. Perbaiki dengan menjawab langsung (ya/tidak), berikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan satu atau dua detail pendukung singkat. Gunakan linking words bila perlu dan jaga maksimal 5 kalimat.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, which my parents bought for me when I was five. I used to ride it to the park near our house almost every afternoon, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without the training wheels.

建議: Jawaban yang diberikan tidak relevan karena bercampur bahasa lain dan tidak menjawab pertanyaan. Jawab langsung dengan pendapat (yes/no or I think...), tambahkan alasan spesifik dan contoh singkat, serta gunakan connective seperti 'because' atau 'for example'. Batasi hingga 5 kalimat.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and shared bike schemes that make cycling convenient. However, cycling is less common in rural areas due to long distances and limited bike infrastructure.

× One speak English.

✓ I can speak English.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject-verb agreement and correct auxiliary/modal to express ability. In English, the first-person singular subject 'I' requires the base verb 'can' or 'am able to' to indicate ability; using 'speak' directly after an implied subject is ungrammatical. Suggestion: start with the subject 'I' and use the modal 'can' (I can speak English) or 'I speak English' if stating a general fact.

× Barapa umur Tamu.

✓ How old are you?

The student responded in Indonesian (or partially incorrect phrase) rather than answering in English to the question about bike popularity. The original phrase appears to ask 'How old are you?' in a mix of languages or dialect but is not appropriate here. Suggestion: answer the examiner's question in English and with a complete sentence relevant to bikes, for example 'Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country' or if the student intended to ask age, use 'How old are you?'