自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific supporting details (when, who gave it, how you used it). Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar, organise ideas with linking words, and give specific reasons and an example. Start with a clear opinion (e.g. “Yes, I think so.”), then use linking words (because, moreover) and specific details (cost, convenience, environment, examples of users).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and much more convenient for short trips. Moreover, they are environmentally friendly, so many students and commuters prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× I have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use the past tense 'had' rather than the present tense 'have'. Use past tense for events or possessions that existed in the past.

× When I was a child, on my birthday my father gave me a bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, my father gave me a bicycle for my birthday.

The original sentence is understandable but the word order and preposition use are awkward. Use 'gave me a bicycle for my birthday' to place the reason ('for my birthday') after the verb phrase. This makes the past-tense action clear and natural.

× I think vibes are quite popular in my country it because it require just a small cost and it's much more convenience compared to cars.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they require only a small cost and are much more convenient compared to cars.

Multiple issues: 'vibes' is likely a typo for 'bikes' (wrong word choice but treated here as pronoun/word misuse). 'It' is incorrectly used to refer to 'bikes' (plural); use 'they'. 'Require' must agree with plural subject 'they'. Use 'only a small cost' or 'low cost' for natural phrasing. 'Convenience' is a noun; use the adjective 'convenient'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun reference.

× Besides that is environmental family to all of us.

✓ Besides that, they are environmentally friendly for all of us.

The original has incorrect word forms: 'environmental family' is wrong. Use the adjective 'environmentally' (adverb) with 'friendly' to form 'environmentally friendly'. Also correct subject reference: 'they' (bikes) rather than nothing. Add a comma after 'Besides that' and use plural verb 'are' to match 'they'.