自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and give a clear, concise structure: a direct topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use past simple and avoid filler sounds. For example, state whether you had a bike, who gave it to you, and one memory or how you used it. Keep answers to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a birthday present, and I still remember learning to ride in the park near our house. I used to ride it to visit friends and to the nearby shop almost every day.

建議: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, especially, so). Replace incorrect words (e.g. “computers/bytes”) with relevant terms like “students” or “commuters.”

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many students and office workers cycle to save money and avoid traffic, and there are also bike lanes near schools and universities which makes cycling convenient.

× I remember that day my father bought the bicycle on to me.

✓ I remember the day my father bought the bicycle for me.

The phrase 'bought the bicycle on to me' uses incorrect prepositions. In English, we say 'buy something for someone' to indicate the recipient. Replace 'on to me' with 'for me' to convey that your father purchased the bicycle as a gift or for your use. Suggestion: Use 'bought ... for me' when indicating who receives an item.

× Uh, I used to, uh.

✓ I used to ride it.

The incomplete sentence 'I used to, uh.' lacks the verb and object after 'used to', which requires a base verb to describe a habitual past action (structure: 'used to + base verb'). Add a verb like 'ride' and an object like 'it' to complete the thought. Suggestion: Provide the base verb after 'used to' (e.g., 'I used to ride it').

× Yes, I think bikes are most popular in my countries because because many computers use the bytes for for the purpose of colleges and schools.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many students use bicycles to get to college and school.

Multiple issues from the provided list apply; primary is singular/plural and word choice. 'My countries' is incorrect when referring to a single country; use 'my country'. 'Computers' and 'bytes' are incorrect words — likely you meant 'students' and 'bicycles'. Also 'use the bytes' is meaningless; replace with 'use bicycles'. The phrase 'for the purpose of colleges and schools' is awkward; use 'to get to college and school'. Suggestion: Ensure correct singular/plural for 'country' and use appropriate nouns ('students', 'bicycles'). Rephrase for natural English: 'many students use bicycles to get to college and school.'