自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use correct tense and grammar, avoid repetition, and add a brief reason with linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought cycling was dangerous. They worried I might fall or get into traffic, so they didn’t allow me to ride on the road.

建議: Give a fuller answer: state your opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many people cycling to work or school, and there are growing bike lanes.

× No, I don't have a bike because I think no, no, no, because my parents thinks biking is dangerous for me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents think biking is dangerous for me.

The student answered a past-tense question (Did you have...) but used present tense 'don't have'; change to past 'didn't have' to match the question (Grammar problem type 6 Past tense issue). Also 'parents' is plural so the verb should be 'think' not 'thinks' (Grammar problem type 27 Subject-verb agreement errors). Combine these: use 'didn't have' and 'think'. Additionally remove repeated 'no, no, no' for clarity. Suggestion: listen to the tense of the question and ensure verbs agree with plural subjects; say 'No, I didn't have a bike because my parents think biking is dangerous for me.'

× Yes.

✓ Yes, they are.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' A one-word 'Yes' is short but does not directly answer the full question. To provide a grammatically complete response in present tense, expand to 'Yes, they are' or 'Yes, bikes are popular.' Ensure the verb 'are' matches the plural subject 'bikes' (Grammar problem type 6 Present tense issue). Suggestion: give a full sentence that repeats the subject and uses correct present tense verb: 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.'