Band 7 Example
Question: Do rewards help a child become better?
Idea 1
Yes
Model Answer
Yes, I think rewards are helpful for children. When kids get a reward, like a small prize or even just some praise, they feel proud and want to do better next time. It motivates them to work harder and try their best. Also, rewards help them see that if they put in effort, they can achieve something. This can really boost their confidence and help them build good habits.
Idea 2
No
Model Answer
No, I don't think rewards always help children become better. Sometimes, kids start to expect a reward every time they do something good, and they might stop caring about learning or behaving well if there's no prize. Also, it can make some children feel bad if they don't get a reward, which isn't fair. I think it's better if children learn to do things because they want to, not just for a reward.